Reviews for Percy Jackson, the First Hunter |
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ItsClassic chapter 2 . 7/25/2019 My OC Name : Grendon Stone Race : Half Giant half human Age : i'll let you decide author Personality : I'll let you decide Author Weapon : A short sword and a gigantic Broadsword Look : Yellow sun-like hair, blue eyes, and a fighter-like body but not too muscled. |
Nightflash chapter 6 . 9/23/2017 Yo this story rocks! Can you update it some time? Thanks |
KnightGalavant chapter 6 . 1/9/2017 Noice |
ajstainer chapter 1 . 8/14/2016 Update |
iLoveSports chapter 6 . 4/14/2016 Hello. This is an amazing story but you rush it a bit. Add more detail and slow it down and you could be one of the best writers on this site. And pls update soon. |
VVabbajacc chapter 3 . 4/13/2016 I'm looking forward for more updates, this is good stuff |
ThreadyMars779 chapter 5 . 4/2/2016 Would love if you could post more your an excellent writer please don't let this sorry die |
AghiTron chapter 6 . 4/4/2016 Ok, OC: Name: Kyle Rayson aka Spiky- Glove-Guy (named by monsters) aka Vigilante (own name, couldn' t come up with a better one. Gender: male Age: 16 Lineage: shadow goddess (you choose) Powers: demigod basics (reaction, resilience) slight speed an strength boost. night vision Skills: good in stealth and unrmed combat. Weapons: An array of bombs from explosive to smoke, gauntlets with spikes. Lots of spikes. Attire: light armor over the upper chest and shins, black lether jacket under it and durable and flexible black cloth pants. a leather belt holding the bombs, a cloak with a schort cape and hood and a mask covering mouth and nose. Looks: dark brown short hair and dark brown eyes. Story: Lived with his father who was killed by a powerful monster. Kyle managed to barely escape into the labyrith and got accustomed to a hard life there. that was when he was 12. salvaging whatever he could find he made gauntlets. when he got out and stumbled upon CHB at the age of 14 he made better gauntlets, his costume and the bombs. He sneaks out using the labyrinth to get out to fight monsters whereever he gets out. He finds a way back thank to Hecate's childrens navigator. Personality: Is mistrusting of new people but will protect anyone at seconds notice. He is extremely loyal to his friends. That is Kyle, the Vigilante. Hope he isn't too OP. Hi causul outfit is a black hoodie and jeaans.. I you have questions, pm me. -AghiTron |
JustLucky05 chapter 6 . 4/4/2016 nice, very nice! I really enjoyed that. I can't wait to see what happens next, and how will Artemis react? I look forward to your next update. |
ethan.lukkar chapter 6 . 4/3/2016 Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon |
ethan.lukkar chapter 5 . 4/3/2016 Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon. |
Eat Lead-riture chapter 5 . 4/3/2016 It's great, please update more. |
Yougi12 chapter 5 . 4/2/2016 Amazing story, can't wait to see what happens, also is the curse that was cast the ancient law where gods can't interfere with their children affairs? |
OldKJunior chapter 5 . 4/2/2016 Epic just no Pertamis overused in these situation and considering that she as you said the daughter of the man who killed every one he knew as a "reward" for helping the gods |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/21/2016 Don't do a crossover please |