Reviews for Percy Jackson, the First Hunter
ItsClassic chapter 2 . 7/25/2019
My OC

Name : Grendon Stone
Race : Half Giant half human
Age : i'll let you decide author
Personality : I'll let you decide Author
Weapon : A short sword and a gigantic Broadsword
Look : Yellow sun-like hair, blue eyes, and a fighter-like body but not too muscled.
Nightflash chapter 6 . 9/23/2017
Yo this story rocks! Can you update it some time? Thanks
KnightGalavant chapter 6 . 1/9/2017
Noice
ajstainer chapter 1 . 8/14/2016
Update
iLoveSports chapter 6 . 4/14/2016
Hello. This is an amazing story but you rush it a bit. Add more detail and slow it down and you could be one of the best writers on this site. And pls update soon.
VVabbajacc chapter 3 . 4/13/2016
I'm looking forward for more updates, this is good stuff
ThreadyMars779 chapter 5 . 4/2/2016
Would love if you could post more your an excellent writer please don't let this sorry die
AghiTron chapter 6 . 4/4/2016
Ok, OC:
Name: Kyle Rayson aka Spiky- Glove-Guy (named by monsters) aka Vigilante (own name, couldn' t come up with a better one.
Gender: male
Age: 16
Lineage: shadow goddess (you choose)
Powers: demigod basics (reaction, resilience) slight speed an strength boost. night vision
Skills: good in stealth and unrmed combat.
Weapons: An array of bombs from explosive to smoke, gauntlets with spikes. Lots of spikes.
Attire: light armor over the upper chest and shins, black lether jacket under it and durable and flexible black cloth pants. a leather belt holding the bombs, a cloak with a schort cape and hood and a mask covering mouth and nose.
Looks: dark brown short hair and dark brown eyes.
Story: Lived with his father who was killed by a powerful monster. Kyle managed to barely escape into the labyrith and got accustomed to a hard life there. that was when he was 12. salvaging whatever he could find he made gauntlets. when he got out and stumbled upon CHB at the age of 14 he made better gauntlets, his costume and the bombs. He sneaks out using the labyrinth to get out to fight monsters whereever he gets out. He finds a way back thank to Hecate's childrens navigator.
Personality: Is mistrusting of new people but will protect anyone at seconds notice. He is extremely loyal to his friends.
That is Kyle, the Vigilante. Hope he isn't too OP. Hi causul outfit is a black hoodie and jeaans..

I you have questions, pm me.

-AghiTron
JustLucky05 chapter 6 . 4/4/2016
nice, very nice! I really enjoyed that. I can't wait to see what happens next, and how will Artemis react? I look forward to your next update.
ethan.lukkar chapter 6 . 4/3/2016
Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon
ethan.lukkar chapter 5 . 4/3/2016
Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon.
Eat Lead-riture chapter 5 . 4/3/2016
It's great, please update more.
Yougi12 chapter 5 . 4/2/2016
Amazing story, can't wait to see what happens, also is the curse that was cast the ancient law where gods can't interfere with their children affairs?
OldKJunior chapter 5 . 4/2/2016
Epic just no Pertamis
overused in these situation and considering that she as you said the daughter of the man who killed every one he knew as a "reward" for helping the gods
Guest chapter 4 . 3/21/2016
Don't do a crossover please
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