Still hate the way you pretray lisanna nali will always be best but the rest of the story is good

Update soon i want to watch natsu and laxus kick jellals ass

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I'm so happy your back to writing this, can't wait for the next chapter, this is one of my favorite fanfics that I've read, looking forward to the future

I hope you don't plan on stopping because I absolutely love this story and I hope you keep on updating regularly.
Cheers

Absolutely brilliant! I love your idea, Natsus character seems unique and well thought out. I really enjoy the progression of Natsu and Erzas love and the plot is simply brilliant. The ending to this chapter has gotten me thinking "what the heck is Jellal doing with those knives, is he going to shank Natsu?" Loving this story!

Awesome! Now a lot of factors will begin to come into play.

Poor natsu he had no idea what to do

And who, per say, odds the target?

Great chapter! :D

Nice chapter

Honestly I forgot about this story but I'm really glad it's back even if you do short chapters I hope you keep updating you are a very good writer

love it

Ha

A good chapter. Thanks.