That was lovely you should have continued brilliant read

great story :)

Thanks for sharing your sweet and gorgeous story. You had me swooning.

Furthermore I'm sure I'm not the only who feels an extra chapter with a bump up in rating would be very nice. Please. Pretty please.

I know I've written numerous reviews of this but... good God. Don't ever stop writing.
I don't think I've ever come across an author of fanfiction of this calibre (and I'm tethered to this site nightly). If there was an award for a authors on here who should be a full time professional writer I'd be willing to walk thousands of miles to hand it to you.
This really is a work of art. Well done you.

This was sweet, and subtle and powerful. Just like espresso.
Very well written. Loved it.

Again, you are so good at the unspoken moments. It's really, really a talent that you should be proud of.

Also, it totally reminds me of the movie Carol.

Oh my lord. This is so well done! You have the tension just right and the symbolism and the reading into things that we all tend to do...

Not to mention your fantastic paragraph about Jane's ongoing battle with the coffee machine. The one that starts with "Maura glanced at the machine again." I was both impressed and highly amused.

Thank you so much!

Yep, still floors me with both punches. Damn How you shake my confidence, this is the kind of thing that makes me sneer at my own stuff and start re-editing.
It's crushing, but in a good way. :-)

Thank you for writing and sharing.

I came back to re-read it and it's still fantastic.
There is one single line-pair that makes me raise a stylistic eyebrow, but I can also see how it flows perfectly so you still get a "10/10, would read again" rating... :-)

You wrote THAT from those two prompts?! You are ACE at this!

waw I truly loved this story.
So well writen, breathtaking
thank you so much for planting this grin on my face
:-) just amazing thank you!

I have to review before I read chapter 2. What a piece of work. You are fast becoming my favourite Rizzles writer. I usually prefer M rated stories but I'm so glad I found these, they're more intimate and seductive than almost anything I've read, of any pairing. Perfect characterisation, I have no trouble imagining any scenario, glance or look. Absolutely stellar work.

Great slow burn (that really wasn't that slow) that really pulled the reader in. Thanks for sharing.

This is wonderful. :)
Very in character, very in keeping with how they might come together as a couple...
Great read.