| Reviews for Valley of Ashes |
|---|
   Sekirei1988 chapter 5 . 11/9/2015 I'm enjoying this story. Ralof is one of my favorite characters in the game and he doesn't get much love. I'mma gonna watch this. |
| karisay chapter 5 . 7/23/2015 next? :( |
| Werde Spinner chapter 5 . 7/11/2015 *delighted pterodactyl noises because this is exactly what I wish had happened in the game* |
| RamenKnight chapter 5 . 6/28/2015 Well this is a fun bit. I am curious as to how you represent the Stormcloaks. I found them to be rather racist, corrupt, and unknowing tools of the Thalmor. Not all of them, there are good people in the rebellion, our protagonist being one, but as a whole i would say that. |
| RamenKnight chapter 4 . 6/28/2015 Well, whats a man to do. The girl he has an eye for is a little more exiting than he expected. |
| RamenKnight chapter 2 . 6/28/2015 Well this is interesting so far. I wonder where it goes from here. |
| Scarlett Franco chapter 5 . 6/8/2015 Ahhhhh! Ralof is my favorite (: awesome story, I'm glad you didn't just jump into the romance scenes unlike some other fics I've read. You're an interesting writer. |
| The Gods Only Now chapter 5 . 6/8/2015 i loved how everyone worshipped Irma and she is like "lol ok" :P, anyway nice chpt |
| woofy78 chapter 5 . 6/7/2015 Yay, you updated (and you're welcome re the reviews - good stories deserve good reviews!)! Naww, she blushed! I'm loving the hints at romance. I wonder how how long they will last before they're pining for each other. Can't wait for another chapter - I am interested to read your take on her first visit to the Greybeards! :) |
| woofy78 chapter 4 . 6/7/2015 Ahhh another wonderful chapter! XD I love Ralof's sense of humour, and how Irma responds to him. Your take on the Word Wall was good too, and I think Irma will make a great Dragonborn; she seems very capable and worthy. I hope you update soon! |
| woofy78 chapter 3 . 6/7/2015 Their interactions are very cute - I am enjoying how the relationship between them is developing. It's also nice to see a chink in Irma's armour, so to speak! |
| woofy78 chapter 2 . 6/7/2015 Hmmm I wonder what Irma's story is, she seems very mysterious! Ralof sounds adorable and sweet, I love him! |
| woofy78 chapter 1 . 6/7/2015 I love that it is from Ralof's point of view - it is different from the usual Helgen stories - it's nice to know what Ralof is thinking and feeling about it all, and how he worries for Irma. Awesome story so far! :) |
| tapioca two-step chapter 1 . 5/27/2015 Very, very good beginning here. I don't think I've read a story from Ralof's point of view yet. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you're going with this story, and I can't wait to see what your Dragonborn is like. :D |
| The Gods Only Now chapter 4 . 5/27/2015 Nice chpt :P |
