I love your writing please update soon if it isn't too much to ask.

Next chap
Pleaseeeeeeee

I'd like to read more, it's an interesting story and I am curious where it will lead to.

Please update soon!

damn... what she gonna do?

I've been busy and finally found some time to review this chapter.
Saeko has been holding that illusion pretty well. I wonder what will happen when someone calls her out on it :P.

Great job with this chapter. Looking forward to the next.

I really love the way you go about turning the common topic of SI and making it into something totally unique! I can't wait for the next chappie!

Games are good. Don't want to dull the mind.

Keep in' it cool. Casual deception.

I haven't had the chance to read it yet...how lame. :P

I wonder...does he mean she looks like someone famous...or who he had little A with.
Heh oh look a snot. I can't tell if he's a brat yet though.

Isn't it dangerous to pose as a strong ninja? I feel like someone's getting in a bit over her head ;) I would totally abuse that worship those students have going on there though.
At least Daichi seems nice without ulterior motives, but then he does have Aoi... Saeko can't catch a break with someone normal. And who knew the Art of War would be so useful?
Decisions, as in she'll have to stop hanging around and start to be useful or what?

Kin seems very interesting, and Aoki seems like a difficult man. I guess he has his reasons.

Douche is probably seeing if he can get any use out of her. After all and unknown language makes great code.

Hey we can't all be ninja man. 'XP

Allergies and asthma huh? Least she's not diabetic else she'd be really screwed there.

Uh oh. If it's anything like a regular class than that means she's the most interesting thing there. Could get troublesome.

(Aoki said Tsuchikage instead of Raikage?)
And we're back to school... I wonder how she will do anything if she doesn't have chakra? Or is it all just theory stuff? It seems awkward to be the only one that old in a class of kids.
Oh no, research. Is it about Saeko, why did she have to fall asleep just then, or did they make her sleep on purpose :/ And Aoki's lightning is so cool, but I guess it was responsible for the whole thing?

Wow, Aoki has reached new levels of "Eff you". Leaving her in the middle of a class without warning and directly after a Shunshin. I would offer my support in revenge if I had the chance. Poor Saeko.

The chapter was great. I wonder what would happen if he tried the same thing he did that brought Saeko to their world a second time? For a moment, I thought he was. Or was he? Ugh. If only the other guy hadn't interrupted him.

Looking forward to what happens next. My guess as to what will happen is that she will be bombarded by questions galore and nearly killed a minimum of 4 times in various ways before Aoki finally comes and gets her again, berating her in some fashion in the process.

Yessss I do like your explanations :D Akemi feels a little creepy, like she's being nice for a reason or something. .. I don't think that's too many characters for one chapter... and I was totally caught off guard when she said Kinkaku force, wow. I wonder what's going to happen now with that, is Saeko in for more panic? :) Also it's totally OK that there's no action yet. As you said we need some exposition before we get to those bits. The pacing is great.

wait... is it tobirama or the nidaime of the kumogakure? this is unique though I always want a story in the timeline of tobirama and the shoidame reign but this will be quite hard for you since there's not much information you could get in the other villages. Heh now that I remembered it the kumo village seems to named their characters from the english alphabet such as ay and bee maybe she promoted it hmmm?