Awww! Blushing Natsu is the most adorable thing ever! I'm already loving how him and Lucy interact! I think you are getting their relationship just right! :)

Only read half of it,i dont like fairy tale,and there was hella spelling mistakes...but overall it was pretty dope,i really enjoyed it and thought it was kinda funny anyway i think u have alot of potential to make some really cool stories good luck!

This is good! *thumbs up* like... really REALLY good :D
Can't wait for the next chapter...