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Hey me again, i just read a lot of the comments and made me think that.. this story was great to this story is amazing to.. HOLLY FUCK I LOVE IIIIITTTT! anyways i haven't seen the original foxy fall in love, either way i really really loved this story and might just keep reading it until something better comes which there won't be, this story tops all of them, and a sequel to the story would be great, like a few people said with springtrap, that would be cool honestly in your own storytelling mind, and a lot of people and i would love that, maybe just one more chapter would be cool too just showing how our foxes r doing and everyone else, like i said before in another comment, u don't have to make anyone if u don't have time to or not intrested.. i just really loved this story that i just really wanna tell ya how well u did, and after all this time of storytelling and writing, another story now could be even better than the last two, also not saying they're not good just saying people's socks will be blown off... im rambling again sorry, u did an amazing job with this story and something so small like a picture with the characters would make our day, well just keep that in mind, great story again and have a great day, nah... have a great life

I FUCKING LOVED THIS! its a little sad that it is over, but it was a great storyline and storytelling my friend, i hope u continue this great story in the future, that would be great bur u don't have to, but this story inspired me to use my writing talent into work and art, if its ok if i make fan art.. anyways im just rambling now, all i gotta say that i reallt loved that story and you did a great job, and it just had so much drama, action and other things that it just pulls u into it, again thank u for a great story and good luck

Well, you definitely fucked up now Chica.

This story was very emotional, and I noticed few flaws. As an aspiring author myself, I’m very picky about the stories I read, often pointing out spelling or grammatical errors, or excessive use of names or words. Regretfully, I noticed that you tend to overuse names, which could start to annoy some people. I recommend you lower how often you use names. Also, there aren’t very many people who know that a baby fox is a kit. They just call it a pup or kid. If you ask me, this deserves a sequel. Perhaps it could be years later, and Springtrap is discovered, before going on a rampage, attempting to continue what he did as William Afton. That would be interesting to see in your style of writing. Also, I imagine I’m not the only one who wants to see what the characters look like. It’s obvious they don’t look the way they do in the games, so what are they like? Perhaps if you could draw it out or get someone from Deviantart or Furaffinity to make an image, and use it as a cover, you could get permission from Scott Cawthon to post a censored version as an E-book online, or just post it as a non-profit story.

omg... okay this is the best. i cried sooo many times while reading this

I WANT MORE! please? no? okay, fine...

Should make a alternate ending where toys won

RApE

In happy caus the ending was happy but in sad cause I know we are not getting a sequel to the story, I just wana ask if you can make a sequel?

Hey, I was wondering, what were the chapters that were mature?

Who else thinks as the best song for Foxy and Vixey's relationship is Partners in crime.

Google it.

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I personly think he should make a new fnaf fic but like all good things they come to a end but he might make a new on so please laddy ye wer a great tail teller (sorty pirait side took over) vut please make a new one soon
Your sincerily story reader man

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