hope you have 5 chapters planned up ready to write soon.

this story has so much potential but your rushing it. also why the hell is Naruto telling everyone everything about him. seriously it's not what a ninja is ment to be like. there is no secrecy with your version of Naruto. on the plus side you do have potential to be a good author, you just need to redo the story and make it a steady pace story.

Continue and update please soon.

Great
When will we continue?

wow that was a lot of writing for you and love it! Is there going to be more chapter i hope so. Keep up the good work on your story.

J'aime.

Great story so far

The point of view usage is horrible, the story is jumpy and rushed. The best thing I can say is that it's not the worst I've read. Next time try to tell the story without keeping it all in the first person and slow down the progress. If your knowledge of the English language is the primary fault of these errors then correct the deficiency.

Love this! Keep going!

Please continue this its so good I would love to finish reading this

Story has awesome potential moves a long extremely quickly please please continue soon

Pls continue this story

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Interesting.

Saturday May 30, 2015.

This is very interesting. A different spin on things.
Naruto and Sasuke sharing brotherly relationship.
Awesome ideas for the couples.