Es verdad, que cuando asesinas a una persona te pones a pensar en las posibilidades que hubieras tenido para no tener que hacerlo, pero el "hubiera" no existe. Pero sin importar las razones siempre quedan las secuelas

Woooow! I didn't know you wrote stories?! God, I have to get on more often, haha~! I LOVED this! You're really good! I'm about to binge read on your stories before writing on some of my own! Good job! :D

absolutely love it

Awesome ending. I think you handled Leo's talk with Raph just fine, and I think it was good for them to talk it out. Also loved the flashbacks of Donnie and Mikey talking to Leo. Nicely done on this. I loved it.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Awesome chapter. I loved the moment between Leo and Raph and how Raph knows Leo isn't a monster and he did what he had to do. But I can see Leo feeling this way and being upset about the whole thing because he's so full of honor and doesn't want to kill unless it's necessary. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Awesome start to this. Yeah, I can see Leo hating guns but having to use one to save his brother's life. Nicely done on this. I loved it.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Great job on the story it was good keep up the great work and keep on writing.

you did very good, i liked this story. Leo helping Raph was a good one. i wonder how Donnie or Mikey would have handled a situation like that? makes me wonder a little...

It's ok. Raph isn't always the easiest to write about with emotions. But with his temper, its amazing it didn't happen sooner. Hopefully it always gets easier to live with, even if its always a regret.

Congratulations! You finished your first fanfiction something not all of us do. It was great, I liked how Leo remembered what he did with each one of his brothers after his first killed. What Donnie and Mikey said to him about the fact, how Raph was comforted by Leo when he did the same thing. How Leo hugged him and talked to him about his first killed and now the share the same weight on their shoulders...I hope you're thinking in write another story of the boys. I love the stories related with Leo and Raph...Anyway, good luck and take care

Love the Raph/Leo moment, it's good to see this side of Raph once in a while. Leo needed to be comforted, he is so tender hearted that it was hard for him to accept that he had killed a man.

Perfect! Everyone is in character too ️

Great job on the chapter can't wait for the next chapter

The first kill is always the hardest because it changes EVERYTHING. And its harder on people who have good hearts, like the turtles.

A good exploration of what Leo might feel after being forced to kill for his family. I'm glad he got out of the angst relatively quickly. I was getting a bit frustrated there with his lack of faith in his family. Good to know he's optimistic.