Reviews for The Air
sweeteners chapter 15 . 4/27/2017
Another cute chapter. Skye's really out to prove to Jill he's worthy of her love, and it seems genuine. It's the least he can do for freeloading right? Haha. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Mokki Takashi chapter 15 . 4/24/2017
Awwww so cute!
sweeteners chapter 14 . 4/4/2017
Slowly but surely Jill is starting to give into Skye's advances, even as hard as she's trying to push it away haha. I suppose this means Jill is a going to let Skye live in her house again? Hmm... I wonder what else is in store for these two. Now that Skye knows his feelings for Jill, is going to try something funny now that he'll be living under the same roof as her? Great chapter by the way! I can't wait to read more.
Mokki Takashi chapter 14 . 4/4/2017
Love it!
sweeteners chapter 11 . 3/27/2017
My heart. Jill is such a bitter character at times that seeing her falter even a bit is enough to make my heart swell haha. I'm glad she caught on to Skye's affections.

And Gustafa was really trying to win Jill's affections? How funny sjsjsj. I just can't see "kickass farmer" Jill ever being remotely interested in someone who like to stop and smell the flowers like Gustafa lol.
sweeteners chapter 10 . 3/27/2017
Why did I almost fall over with laughter when Skye said the tape was wet. This was one of your fluffiest chapters yet (and probably the fluffiest it's going to get. What a shame for a poor fluff lover like me!) Jill realizing there's more then meets the eye when it comes to Skye and that he cares for her a lot more than she thinks he does warms my heart.
sweeteners chapter 9 . 3/27/2017
Yes! Witch Princess and Skye interactions! She's even more immune to Skye's antic than Jill is. This chapter was funny, I found myself falling over with laughter so much. Can't wait to read more.
sweeteners chapter 8 . 3/27/2017
lmao I read it wrong, the Witch Princess burns down the stable he lives in. Poor guy haha, now all he's left with is Jill's manure filled cave field.
sweeteners chapter 7 . 3/27/2017
I appreciate that although the Witch Princess is Jill's friend and she cares about her, it doesn't mean she's immune to her pranks and mischievousness. That's just the price Jill has to pay for befriending such a girl. I wonder if she's going to pin this all on Skye? Yikes, watch out Skye!
sweeteners chapter 6 . 3/27/2017
Ah yes, princely asshole. Just the way I think of Skye. This was a cute chapter. I liked the idea of Skye meeting the Harvest Goddess and seeing how impatient she is (And he still manages to charm her lol) The banter between Jill and Skye gives me life, I'm really starting to like them lol.
sweeteners chapter 4 . 3/27/2017
I wonder why the Witch Princess rushed out and dumped her books in Jill's bathtub? Things are starting to get interesting...
sweeteners chapter 3 . 3/27/2017
I like the backstory you've given Skye. Once again, Jill's headstrong personality seems to compliment Skye's overly flirtatious one, but maybe i'm just being biased. After all, I really loved fiery female leads lol.
sweeteners chapter 2 . 3/27/2017
I like the dynamic you've written between Jill and the Witch Princess. Jill's personality is written in a way that makes it believable that'd she'd have a friendship with the troublemaking Witch Princess. I've always wanted to see Witch Princess and Skye interact and it looks like your story is going to make that happen. Can't wait to read more!
sinaisalittldbird chapter 13 . 12/19/2016
Whoa, I'm speechless, I am really falling head-down in love with this. So I'm honestly hoping to have for once found a masterpiece that was not abandoned half way through, because it would be such a shame –
Although it does look positive so far (I think?)

I can't give you an expert's opinion of any sort, but keep up this great work! And know that you'll be making yet another maiden's heart burst of joy c:
Mokki Takashi chapter 13 . 8/16/2016
What a cute chapter!
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