Reviews for Family Ties |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter! Enjoyed the party. I do hope Alduin is able to make progress on his plans for the cup and Harry... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter showing how the class really should have gone with that age children. Neville's sarcastic comment about how making the Lestranges dead was not the kind of amusing that Lupin was wanting was spot on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. I’ve really enjoyed your story over the last few days, hope you keep finding time and energy to update. You’ve got a really interesting take on the world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Here, here. The best any person could expect would be a vague idea. Jo's book descriptions of things don't really go into enough detail. Does a boggart read your surface thoughts? Your subconscious? If it's the first then that may not be what you're really most scared of, just what popped into your head, kind of like telling someone to not think about pink elephants. If it's the subconscious, well unless it's a fear you've actually faced or based on some deep-seated trauma there's little chance you're going to know what it actually is. I also didn't get book Lupin's explanation when speaking to Harry later about the dementors being fear of fear. I get they're scary but they don't actually inspire fear but rather despair. If Jo wanted to say that a 3rd Year Harry feared being afraid then she should have used the cupboard under the stairs as I imagine to Harry nothing could be more terrifying after 2 years of having friends at Hogwarts than being stuck back in the cupboard and told none of it had been real. In fact, I think I vaguely remember reading a fic where that was used. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting chapter. Looks like the kids are learn some interesting things and others just shrug it away. Wasn't to impressed with Remus though, thought he'd be better at teach the kids about the Bogwart, and I'm sure Neville's idea of what frightened him wasn't what he was expected. Looks like he's not to interested in Harry at least not at the moment |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. Colossal blunder for Dumbledore as well. Awaiting more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fanfic is excellent! I can’t wait to read the next 40 chapters! I really enjoy the relations between Harry, Abdulaziz and Draco. Everything is so smart, credible and far more mature than the original. Alduin character is so well developed! The Ravenclaws have won my heart. |
![]() ![]() Glad you’re showing Ron as a prat, rather than Evil or a Pawn of Professor Dumbledore, as so many stories do. He’s young & foolish: a normal, natural combination. Young and foolish go together like English muffins and butter. |
![]() ![]() Draco did have potential, but it went to waste. |
![]() ![]() Yes, life with the Dursleys was far simpler. |
![]() ![]() Hard to believe school houses can influence adults after graduation to this extent. |
![]() ![]() Alduin was downright catty about Augusta. |
![]() ![]() Surprised Harry would any exposure at all to French at his age. |
![]() ![]() Good beginning |