Reviews for Right In Front Of You |
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MissWitchx chapter 1 . 9/14/2015 I completely love the fact that you wrote the Next-Gen characters as adults; it was really refreshing to read after the endless next-gen fics I've read that are set in Hogwarts years. I'm a Teddy/Victoire shipper, but this was still adorable all the same. I didn't quite believe someone as career-driven as Hermione would get involved in telling Lily she had to settle down, but I still enjoyed the concept of this fic all the same, and it was written beautifully. :) |
truebeliever831 chapter 1 . 6/22/2015 Yea this is me being too lazy to log on to leave your reviews. This was fab Seriously. This is a pairing ive always been curious about and I quite enjoyed the way you wrote them. I very much like your characterization of lily. Good job |
estels chapter 1 . 6/9/2015 Aw! That was adorable. Normally I'm not into Teddy/Lily (TeddyVic is my OTP) but this was cute and well written. I absolutely LOVED the parallel at the end where Victoire's daughter found Teddy and Lily kissing. Very ironic and clever. Good job! |