Wonder how it will end...

Curious if you'll finish this one. Really enjoying it.

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Plz plz continue on with the story, I'm hooked on it.
Rest In Peace for authors who have lost their lives and may they be happy wherever they are.

Good.

I really enjoy this story and I love that Gohan is suffering side effects of his de aging but he still acts completely child like. Piccolo is such a good daddy!

my theory is that the wish messed with his brain slightly. because we are so complex if shenron was to revert him back in the way he did, it would more than likely cripple his intellect.

while goku didn't do a good job. I can take solace in the fact that there was no possible way he could have known he was doing something wrong due to the way he was raised and how nobody ever corrected him.

...You know? I don't think much writers actually did a fanfiction story of Eradication of the Super Saiyans. Though, I'm more of a fan to the original, I did like the newly updated one, on a count it didn't take just Goku to finish the enemy off.

Also… By the 'dark pit', could that be the depression and pain Gohan bottled up deep inside himself, when he was originally older? And, is it also be from the negative feeling Gohan was feeling/yelling earlier, could also be from Dr. Lychee and "past enemies"?… I wonder if he'll end up turning into a Super Saiyan, again, even though last time made him very ill.

I do hope that Whis would see the situation Earth is in and bring both Vegeta and, despite still being angry, Goku to help out.

just another pathetic self-insert goku hating fanfic

Good chapter.

…I'm gonna have to agree with Beerus… Though, in my term, it's in people's nature to be selfish and only consider about themselves and/or (at times) their family. I mean, yeah, there are selfless people out there who would even put their own safety/life on the line, but (to me) that's only for those who are able to push past their instinct to save themselves and help others (police, fireman, soldiers, etc). While others would prefer avoiding a situation like that to save themselves, have others do meaningful tasks that they could easily do, and continue on with their life as if they matter more/are superior than others… So, I think Beerus should've said that people are Selfish Parasites.

And because of Goku's selfish desire to fight stronger opponents, he placed all thirteen universes at risk on being erased, without thinking about the consequences that his selfishness would endanger himself, his home and those he cares about… In some way, he may be a hero to others he actually saved/protected/rescued, but he sure as hell isn't a saint when it comes to those he cares about and prefers to keep training to fight stronger opponents that may actually put everyone in great peril… It's a big wonder why (in the show) Gohan never has any resentment towards his father for the decisions he makes, and why he didn't consider staying with Piccolo after Namek or Cell… Maybe even after Majin Buu.

...Piccolo should be allowed to train on Beerus' World, if Gohan were to go when he's stronger; with the possibility of Gohan's life being at risk, he should do whatever it takes to help the boy's progress of his training and to increase his own abilities to protect his son… I hope there will actually be a thing for Super Namekian Gods to exist, since there are Super Namekians (as we learned from Movie 4: Lord Slug).

Great chapter.

When are you going to make the next chapter

This was a good fic xD.