zetsu when he finds out his mother alive and as a child. or she against nagato. seeing the rinnegan she will just snap.

n when naruto n sasuke leaves she thinks she will be alone n in peace but kakashi force her to stay n trains her. poor kaguya.

n meeting madara. will be gold! n imagine her go into the island with naruto n meet B
she will have now persona and the rapping of the other jinchuriki. XD.

Orrrrrr meeting hidan and kakuzu. just imagine the two of them cursing each other. n kaguya"s joy when she finds that she can stab hidan repeatedly, he can bleed and he cannot die.

n kakuzu watching from the side lines n muttering about two hidans. n her seeing nagato n the rinnegan n snapping

u should continue it. plz. there are so many great opportunities.

meeting Tsunade will be amazing! n somehow her learning medical ninjutsu. lessons would be a battlefield between them, words n bones n punches. while poor shizune trying to break then apart.

n later meeting yamato. i feel so sorry for him having to deal with her. he will try to put his scary face and kaguya will show his. n dealing with Sai.

n once she knows medical ninjutsu, having the bridge incident. naruto calms down and yamato tell her to heal him but she doesnt want to waste her previous chakra on him.

meeting hidan and sasori. epic moment.

This story is gold. XD. i cannot stop laughing. kaguya's POV is everything. i can just imagine a miniature kaguya dressed in what she first appeared glaring and insulting people.

The fact that she threw a shuriken at Zabuza is simple amazing. I want her to trying ninjutsu like fireball or mud wall etc.

Plz tell me u haven't given up on it T.T its so good. i just want to see her in the chunin exams, meeting gaara and Orochimaru.

It will be an amazing thing to read. i can imagine kaguya wanting to join the Sanin so she can destroy konoha and the world XD

Or having her meet Kabuto. But i really want to see her with Gaara. oh! And Lee asking her to be his gf like he did with sakura. i can imagine her being held back by the two boys while she tries to kill Bushy Brows

Well, I was hoping to see the Wave mission in this fic before I died. Now I have!

Kaguya's POV is absolutely, side splittingly hilarious to read. It's sparse, eternally sarcastic and effectively Tsun-Tsun to everything in existence. Plus watching her break down as the reality of the world bludgeons her with lessons is just great fun.

I am seriously intrigued by the 'can't tree walk' situation. Especially because it's a great way to pull a reveal that little miss 'knows everything about Chakra, I invented it!' apparently is remarkably ignorant about it. Either A: It really is a psychological block, she legitimately is preventing it from working out of sheer disbelief. or B: Her Chakra really is different, fundamentally, then anyone elses. Both present fascinating story opportunities.

Also I kinda want to see the moment where Naruto and Sasuke realize that effectively God was their third teammate. A solid rant about "And you two basically killed me, twice!" or worse yet the whole 'children reincarnated' thing. Or both, both is good.

So I'll be waiting, patiently, on more of this.

Great story I really liked it I hope that you have not given up on it.

will u update?

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Hilarious!

Damn I really love this story massive change from the usual, really refreshing.

I like this a lot

Hopefully you continue this. It is a very enjoyable story.

Good chapter

This is an incredibly amusing concept for a story, and well executed so far. Please continue.

Please continue this, is so good