So dark...

Holy shit I got some strong Attack on Titan vibes from this fic. In fact, when I read the first few sentences, I thought it was a cross over. The stuff about freedom and how the world is cruel especially. I really love this because Naruto and Naruto fanfics like to glodd over some of the harsher realities, like starvation, poverty, homelessness and protitution. This AU is fucking amazing. Just. All of my love.

that was great

I cried my poor heart strings this was a tear jerker
I love that last line

You're writing style is very good. Made the story more enjoyable to read! Thank you for writing this! :)

So sad! But I loved it.
The way you write is amazing! :D

Yes! This is amazing! :) you're a very good writer and I definitely think you should continue you this. XD

Im not good with constructive critizism, but i liked your story lots please keep writing and sorry fpr my broken english!

Please Update soon!:)

Continue? I want to know who captured them in the first place, if they'll cause problems in the future and how things change with their team more unified.