Reviews for The Longest Hunt
ilikedyinglight123 chapter 7 . 8/14
I stopped reading for a couple of weeks because I was afraid of seeing/reading the results if he did go on a rampage in the village.
RandoFox chapter 18 . 7/22
BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD...wait, wrong fandom... Anyways, this story is quite a joy to read, hope to see more.
Pimity chapter 3 . 6/2
he's so useless lmfao. have you ever played bloodborne?
Zeratul795 chapter 17 . 5/27
So I think you have done such a great job on this story. However, you have not updated anything for 3 years. It’s my belief that if you can’t keep writing due to personal concerns, that’s fine. If you need to take a hiatus from writing, that’s fine. But I do think that if need to do these things you should, at the very least, post an update saying so. At the beginning of the last chapter, you say, “it’s been a year, but I’m back for sure.” Then you don’t post anything after that. Again it’s fine if you want to stop or take a break, but tell us please. Or maybe you’re just building up your load of chapters to blow it all over us. Regardless, at the very least say what the plans are for this story, and if you are stopping permanently. And I know that this account is still active because the last story you favorited was published February 3rd and updated May 25th. So at the very least you were active in February. I don’t want to force anything on you. But I thought I should put my thoughts and tell you what I think. Thank you for making such an amazing story regardless.
Anonymous chapter 18 . 5/27
This is an absolutely amazing story. It is just a shame that it seems that you decided to stop writing here. If you do decide to return however, I will be waiting for your continuation of the story. Once again, amazing job with everything.
LostSoulWeeping chapter 1 . 5/11
So is this dead? Hasn't been updated in a long while, so I'll assume so.
Nikkless chapter 2 . 4/6
in my opinion the start was so-so and im not really a fan of the memory loss route. but we will see where this goes
Guest chapter 18 . 2/20
YOU BASTARD HOW COULD YOU NOT CONTINUE THIS AMAZING FANFIC, you make me sad :(
Trevor chapter 18 . 2/11
Wo hoo! 2 000 follows! And god i miss this fic. Any chance of a preview or something?
Another S.T.A.L.K.E.R chapter 18 . 2/4
Its hard to say specifics, but some of the Chaeza interactions are quite nice. Don't know what to think regarding Neo in this story other than a distraction.

The MC seems a little TOO patient, but the cordial\ gentlemanly air is new.
Most other OCs written into a similar situation of conflict\ distrust will either be begrudgingly acquiescent to imposed conditions and rules, completely submissive (lacking a spine, like with many Jaune instances).
Yours takes a somewhat different approach while sharing some aspects of the former still leaves an impression of it being 'fresh' or a bit more unique.

Good story so far.
Yang is always a bitch.
Blake is always a nosey hypocrite. (Not so much in this story as with others).

Thanks for another chapter, hope to read more in the near future.
Another S.T.A.L.K.E.R chapter 11 . 2/3
Yang is almost always a cunt in Rwby fanfiction.
This story certainly is no exception.
MetalBatt chapter 17 . 2/1
OH YEAH, SIBYLL?! MY MANS FINNA CLAP SOME CHEEKS?!

Probably not :/... Though I will say that the whole scene between Sibyll and Sylvia made me have the biggest shit eating grin I've ever had from reading this, and probably any fic if I'm being honest lmao! Too bad nothing will come of it since the next chapter is the last and I'm sure that this fic had either been dropped or put in indefinite hiatus :((((...
MetalBatt chapter 16 . 2/1
That ending was just too damn good.
"He's even nice enough to let me and Weiss share his bed." And I'm glad that the team has come to sort of accept Sibyll, he needs more people he can trust...
MetalBatt chapter 15 . 1/31
Oh. Neo a freak-freak, huh?
MetalBatt chapter 14 . 1/31
I don't remember there ever being a side mission that required you to adopt a child. Hmm, strange . Must've only been in the beta...

But yeah, that scene with Chisa was too damn adorable and heart breaking. Good thing Chad Sibyll was there to save the day, as any good lad would do :)! Still don't like Yang, though. Even if I understood where her judgment is coming from.
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