You should make this fanfic Under the COMPLETE section to encourage ppl to read it

I'm confused. When CRDL arrive at Mountain Glen, Coco makes it sound like all the first years are together; but the planning at the end of this chapter implies that it's only RWBY, JNPR and CRDL.

Come to think of it, when Oobleck assigned groups for that essay a while back, there wasn't any mention of the other students, just "CPW; RJD; BNS; and finally RYR." Don't tell me you think there are only 12 first years in all of Beacon? What about Yang's friends from Signal, or the boys Yang ogles the night before initiation? Did they all get expelled or something?

I'm going to ignore the Nevermore mention when they reach the ruins, so that I can keep thinking of this as canon-compliant. (In canon, the black bishop pieces, along with a white pawn, are already gone when Yang and Blake arrive. I assume this is because they got delayed fighting the Ursa.)

People who know Ren and Nora? And don't warn Russel to "stay away from the crazy girl"? Le gasp!

Marker Academy is now in my headcanon alongside Signal and my own Flare. :)

Sweet fucking God... this was actually SOOOO good!

Easily one of the best RWBY fanfics, no, fanfics I've read. I LOVED seeing all the characters interact with each other in such magnificent ways. Really.

I essentially read this entire fic today, I just couldn't stop. It was sooooo well done.

Rainstorm4 you've blown my expectations out of the water, and in doing so made this one of my favorite fanfics.

I doubt you'll read this, but if you do, I wish you'd understand exactly HOW MUCH entertainment and happiness this fic has brought to me.

Thank you

This has been one hell of a ride and I loved every second of it.

I do believe this is one of the best stories I have found ever since I got on this site.

The Sword of Damocles: You never know if and when your college roommates are fucking. Too real. Too real. Sometimes you think there is peace and then you realize they are hiding under a bed for masochism.

Great Chapter. Also had lots of laughs. You bring a lot of personality to the characters that don't have much of it.

No, tropes page say no spinoff

Don't know about a sequel, but TV Tropes said there is a spinoff called A Harvest of Dust?

TV Tropes said there is a story inspired by this called A Harvest of Dust. It's about Amber?

Call me shallow, but I have skipped over this fic time and time again. I've had my doubts about reading it, but the praise I've heard regarding this fic isn't anything short of true. I especially enjoy how in the rwby verse, CRDL is generally disliked but you manage to make their reasons for being disliked characters, justified from their perspectives- the world isn't black and white, in a sense.

Keep in mind that he hasn't marked it as complete yet. If, in a future season, there is a chance for CRDL to come in, we'll see a continuation. Hopefully. This is definitely in my top fanfiction, regardless.

If RT used CRDL like you did there show could have been better and with a lot more plotting within their story line

This was a good fic
Quite well written