Beautiful, this is so sad! Poor Loki, I love this so much! This is really brilliant, you’re a really great writer! This is just so endearing and bittersweet, my heart just melts! :’)

OMG THIS WHOLE THING IS SO GOOD BUT THE ENDING. LIKE WOW. ITS SO BEAUTIFUL

I really liked the beginning, it was so vivid and descriptive, but by the end I felt like you puttered out? Still, fabulous writing and fun to read—you wrote it quite eloquently. Good luck with you future stories!

Much Love,
Soulhearts

Very sweet. Is the second bit supposed to be part of the movie sequence? Or a complete AU?

AWWWWWWWWWWWW!