This was really good! I liked it

I love this story, it's so beautiful. I can feel the calmness, and everything, and I can totally picture it. It kinda gives off that kind of... dreamlike vibe, like... like a sleep-like feeling. I'm not sure how to explain it, but this piece is truly amazing.

This story is really amazing: perfectly written, the characters are IC (even though I was a little sad when I understood Rin didn't love Shiemi as she did) and the style makes the reader lose in the story and breath with the girl. It's really simple but captivating at the same time. Very well done :)

Simple and sweet. I love it.

This is the first story I've read in the Blue Exorcist category, and I have to say, I'm glad I chose this one. :)

Sweet and simple, just how I like it~ Your description and style of writing is also lovely, and from the looks of you, your spelling and grammar is near perfect! The only thing I'd like to point out is comma usage-there were some places where they should've been used, but weren't. For example:

["What are you doing Shiemi?"]
Comma before "Shiemi." Anytime a person is being directly referred to by name in a sentence, you use commas around their name, such as in this case.

There were a couple other cases, but I'm too lazy to find them. But I still thought I'd let you know for future reference! :)

Again, great job on this sweet and adorable story!

~Hayley

This was beautiful

This is the first fic I read in Ao no Exorcist, and there's only one word to describe how I feel: YEAH!
I don't know why this one-shot is underrated (for me, that is), but the way you set the atmosphere for the two is something I would never have thought. Sure, I do have some ideas for fics, but still...
To be able to express Shiemi (and a part of Rin's too) in just 1,430 words is a talent you should be proud of. Thank you for this wonderful one-shot.
It's a heart-warming start, and the ending is just perfect. I haven't read the manga, but in the anime Shiemi likes Yukio more (as hinted in the flashbacks). It's just cute to have Rin and Shiemi like this; you're an awesome author! xoxo

YYYYYEEEEEAAAAA

A very sweet way to bring them together, though I don't think Rin would really act like this if Shiemi did admit her feelings.