Reviews for A Beach Palace
GoldeN ViZionZ chapter 3 . 1/9/2019
Gotta agree with you on your opinion of jerza and nalu, they are both annoying to me. I would also make Natsu slightly less of an idiot though if I owned fairy tail, and he would definitely be stronger.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/25/2018
Dude, i luv you for pointing that out. LOL with theGrayZa shipper tho.
Soulless Anti-Hero chapter 2 . 4/1/2018
great! Love the natsu x erza ship. Makes more sense to me or maybe im crazy. Not a fan of jeall x erza, just like you!
I present myself as Lari chapter 1 . 2/10/2017
All Your chapters were very eeee great but i would like you to improve more and important write more and about Natsu and Erza in Tower of Heaven when they were kids pleaseee!:-D
MostBelovedGuest chapter 2 . 10/27/2016
Aww~ This is great!
arinasution5 chapter 7 . 8/29/2016
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maes 56 chapter 7 . 8/2/2016
cool can't wait!
Epic roleplayer chapter 2 . 7/29/2016
I Like this keep doing a good job
OrangeSpark5555 chapter 6 . 7/9/2016
Great story! Keep it up!
Fireflame159 chapter 7 . 7/9/2016
So should I go look at this... I'll go check it out.
Death Kettle chapter 7 . 7/9/2016
Sounds like a good idea I just hope he isn't too OP lol
Tragic Ren chapter 4 . 7/9/2016
Really one of the best NaZa stories I ever read. You are my favorite fanfiction author by the way.
Patriota1993 chapter 7 . 7/9/2016
S ... I really like that story, there is so little good Natsu / Erza fanfic
DdraigTrueEmperor9 chapter 7 . 7/9/2016
Sad to hear about this fic, getting remade at least one can still re-read it again really liked this one.

Had to check the other and see how it goes.
Death Kettle chapter 6 . 7/6/2016
Great story! Can't wait to read what happens next!
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