It's been a long time since you posted this, so I take it you will not continue? I just found this and would very much like to see the story go on... :)
I agree with the other reviewer: Your Ekko is very real, very human and that makes it fun to read.
The only little mistakes I would like to point out are that the lore actually states Ekko's parents to be alive. [which you can totally skip for the sake of the story, as it also states that they work. a. lot. :D] Second, I don't see him just going back to sleep in the back-alleys of Zaun like that. Yes, he got hit on the head, yes, he's tired and in pain but no, I would guess he'd at least crawl after the two girls, find them gone and then drag himself home. Sleeping there might just be his death, don't you think? The Zaun he depict sounds like a rough place to me.

other than that good job! The action scenes were good and realistic and I'd love to read about his hunt for that z-drive-core-thingy-blue-crystal-you-know-what-I-mean!
Birb

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Thanks to everyone that has read this and especially you guys who reviewed. I'm really glad that people are enjoying it and yes, paragraphs is something I've always been fairly hopeless with. /
I will definitely try and break it up a bit more next time!

Yes! Abso-frickin-lutely yes! Love the realness of Ekko! Just one bit of advice? I mean no harm in this but I believe it would be easier for the reader to absorb the unfolding events if the paragraphs were shorter, separating one long into two or three depending on the length. I really enjoyed this chapter and hope to see more soon!

WOAH WOAH, that was incredible, you sure have a talent for writing. I absolutdly love thess kind of fanfics, great pacing and i like how the characters are very much like are gonna continue this right? RIGHT? Luv it 3