These two are wonderful. Love this piece you wrote.

This was a great fun to read!

Oh Inuyasha. You just have to stick your foot in your mouth. He's so perfect. Only Kagome could put up with his nonsense. This story was tons of fun! Thank you so much!

Oh Kagome is so freakin adorable like. I can't take it. She's so good. And that ending line. "Widowed at 19, my mother would be so disappointed." I can't stop laughing.

OMG I am dying. Inuyasha is thinking a mile a minute. This poor Inu. He means well. OMG.

He found himself in her eyes, and she lost herself in his (paraphrasing). Lovely.

I love how Grandpa gives a birthday blessing every year, so sweet!
I also rolled laughing at the Sesshomaru shirne in Ch 1. Go Rin!
And Kagome here? Spot on!
"I tried to contain my fury, but it wanted me." Brilliant!

Lol, you have nailed IY here!
I can easily see this happening.

You sold me with "I don't even know what wives are expected to do"! And honestly, everyone needs more nap-loving InuYasha in their lives. It's official.

I'm in love all the little details in this first chapter—from all of the ways that InuYasha and Kagome can't nap together to how Miroku and Sango pound information into InuYasha's mind so hard that he forgets about it—they make everything so much better.

This is so in character and amazing and sweet ugh
Thank you for the read!

You said that it's hard for you to write Inuyasha, but I think this is spot on! I feel like if he was relaying a story to someone or writing a journal entry or whatever, that he'd sound exactly like this. And I love how you write Kagome so sassy. "I will kill him Widowed at 19, my mother would be so disappointed." Cute little slice of InuKag's married life. I loved it!

I love this soooo much

Hahaha cute story