I am sobbing right now ,because this is so accurate it breaks my heart...I can see this happening. Ruby's reaction, the way Liam interprets those last few moments with his brother, and just all of the aspects in this story- seem so realistic that it has me in tears.

OMG! love it please post soon!

I absolutely loved this! I agree when you said that Cole's death was overlooked, and I really wish there had been a moment like this in the books as he is one of my favorite characters. This was really well written and gave me some closure so thank you for this amazing story! :D

Loved it. I really wish there had been a moment like this in the book.

Your right. Coles death really was over shadowed. This was wonderful and sad. You should really keep going! There aren't many darkest minds fanfics. Write more, or turn this into something, at the very least people will really enjoy your writing. I know I already think your really good. This was great!