Fucking Baelish... what he did to Jeyne is inexcusable...

Yay Dany and Robb !

I love this story, how you handled the war and all. But I feel like the part after Jon won could’ve benefited from more chapters. I know you really wanted to get to the War of the Dawn but in the beginning of your story you had gone to great length to develop characters and their emotions and all. Jon taking King’s Landing would’ve benefited from more development. Meetings with people, reactions, knightings, whatever...

Jon meeting his aunt is BIG but I feel it was super hasty. You barely acknowledged Dany’s whole group ! Why not include a scene of Jon/Robb/Westeros generals meeting Dothraki leaders and Grey Worm and all ? Or people seeing the dragons for the first time ? Even Robb meeting Dany (future pairing) was just a few lines.

Overall it doesn’t take away from the enjoyment but I was really looking forward to the two groups meeting and mingling with each other. Jon seeing Sam again, Jon dealing the letters he found and Jorah’s spying (telling him to never do that shit again)...

Anyway as it seems like we’re gonna have a Dragon Princess north, can’t wait to see that happen

I can’t wait to get to that Wall business !

I wonder if your Aegon is real or is really a PissWater Prince

The battles were so exciting ! I’m so happy Sandor beat fucking Gregor !

It’s also pretty fitting that Ramsay died like a bitch...

But I have to wonder, where’s Jamie and did he send Cersei to her death purposefully or was she ambushed ?

I can’t wait for the campaign beyond the wall to start ! I also hope Theon will distinguish himself within the Night’s Watch and earn back a bit of honour

I know it’s horrible but I knew Ramsay and Joffrey would be an amazing combo (amazingly dark but still).

Can’t wait for Dany to be back in Westeros !

And now we have that fateful moment for Tyrion...

I knew the direwolves would arrive to save Arya and Sansa. Against who and when ? Who’s knows

I’m glad Varys was there to warn Jon. Let’s see what they do to those Freys and Boltons

Fuck the Boltons and Lannisters are planning a New!Red Wedding ! This terrifies me, who knows who will die from it...

Sansa getting hurt dancing with Clegane, that was hilarious ! On the other side, Petyr and Lysa was disgusting... I still know Petyr will try to betray Robb and Jon when he can...

This chapter was so wholesome ! Sansa’s talk with Arya was great, Jon and Marg are adorable ! Now we just need to get rid of the shadow cast by Ramsay

I’d bet anything that Ramsay and Qyburn are cooking up some shit

I loved Tyrion’s POV ! And Marg being saucy, I like that !

Sansa with Sandor was so wholesome! I can’t wait for the big family reunion !

Jon’s reunion with Arya nearly made me cry ! I love the bond they have together !

Sam’s reaction was priceless !

Wow Jon was a romantic gesture ! I’m pretty sure there’s nothing better you could’ve done !

I can’t wait for Arya’s account of what happened !