But the story is awesome, just that it seems like Athena the goddess warrior who wore her shine armour at battles that hail and mighty ferocious goddess got that insult.. It seems damn what the... Insult

Plus terra got lost memories syndrom and she never got that wisdom other than paranoid

Athena not sweet and weak like terra you need... Athena is a strong goddess and ferocious during war she didnt hesitated and sweet like terra it such an insult to where athena the most ferocious warrior, the strongers goddess became lame and sweet like terra omg

I dont see light as eris, all this time Lightning is actually was design and made according to goddess war with armour the nama is Athena. Athena is a warrior goddess, but she also goddess of wisdom, inspirations and so on. She is ruthless and fierce in war but saviour of ppl

I can't believe I have never read this masterpiece before! I consider myself a huge fan of your works, too! This is absolutely fantastic and masterfully crafted! I truly admire your imagination and wordcraft. I am in awe of your never-failing skill at producing such voluminous, elaborate, and quality work! Excellent job as usual!

ah ben voila se que j'appelle un parfait hoine chote

ps:dommage que Ligthning et Noctis non pas fait une visite improvisée pour se foutre de tous le monde après que Stella et mangé la pomme serait était trop drôle ! encore bien joué !

Wow! This was beautifully written and I love how the final fantasy characters were all adeptly woven into Greek mythology! This was truly a pleasure to read and its creative plot line with the apple was intelligently crafted. The descriptions were also marvellously written. I also adored the Lightning and noctis parts.

This story was truly amazing. I look forward to reading more stories from you.

Beautiful. It is an exquisitely descriptive piece of work.

Oh my god, this is the hell of an exciting short story! Never before have I seen such darkness and chaos bloomed so dangerously in our favorite couple :v. Though you altered the original Greek myth a litte, it is still significant as ever, if not better :3. I am in love with Lightning's characteristics. So devious and charming at the same time :3. Noctis is kinda funny too :), a bit spoiled and impatient, just like how he is portrayed :v. I wonder if you will make a sequel :)...

Because this story is just amazing

Wicked ;D
Hahahaha... I love it ! This's beautifully enchanting, I love dark fic. So much hatred...hahha :D
Thank you for wonderful tale, I love it to bits. See ya :D

I found this first in AO3 and I was about an hour reading this story, now I saw her again in and stayed one hour reading again because it is absolutely amazing and worth spending hours reading.