Reviews for Steam Powered
TDDolphin chapter 8 . 7/24/2018
You know what's funny? I read a story very similar to this one several days ago called Team Navia. That story was longer, and pretty much played out identical to this one. Only the characters were kind of OOC, and I didn't like how Lucy, Gray and Mirajane were written. So I was very disappointed with that story, even though there was a great idea in there. Then about 3 days ago I found your story, and saw that it was pretty much identical to that story, only shorter, with the characters written far better, and I saw that Steam Powered ended 6 months before Team Navia started. I swear, it was like a sign or something. Like the gods told me "Don't worry TDDolphin, there is a version of this story to your liking!" Go figure.

Anyway onto Steam Powered. This was really fun to read UK-824! I loved how Natsu and Juvia got along with each other as they went on their first job together, I loved they beat up those bandits, I loved how Gray was much more chill in his jealousy as he and the guild read the Sorcerer Weekly issue than the other story, I loved Gajeel being protective of Juvia in a brotherly way, I loved the fight against the Fire Kraken, I loved Juvia and Natsu going shopping together for themselves and for Lucy, I loved how Gray asked Juvia to hang out the next day (Nice tie-in to Welcome back, Froash btw), and I loved Natsu and Lucy's whole time in the epilogue. As you could probably tell I loved pretty much everything in this story!

This was a really good Natsu/Juvia friendship story UK-824! There aren't too many of those on Fanfiction so it was nice to read something different and fun. I just wish we could've seen Erza and Wendy somewhere. Ah well, you did fantastic either way :)
toykoprincessxx chapter 1 . 11/8/2016
I can already see the jealus gray.

And i lve a jealaus gray. Gihihihi
Panda Crescent chapter 8 . 11/2/2016
This was super cute! Thank you for the great story!
LaminateGem12 chapter 8 . 4/7/2016
I think I loved this too much. I'm gonna show this to all of my friends who like Fairy Tail. Even my guy friend who doesn't read fanfics XD
This was sooo cute; not only does Juvia experience love at first sight, but also besties at first fight! (That was so corny, please forgive me)
I'm really happy that "COOOL" reporter dude.. Jason? I'm glad he didn't pair the two in the magazine and people got the wrong idea, or else I might have broken my computer. It was okay that the jeweler made the slip-up, he's just an innocent old man that I want to hug for fueling my giddiness.
There are so many parts of this fic that I adored, from "Where to start? Igneel was a bastard." to "Levy noticed that she could see her breath" to "Natsu-kun [sob] is so [hick] s-so [sob] kiiiiiiinndd!" to "... Juvia's not handling this very well" to "Cana hit her face off a frozen block of beer". (Something like that, I'm bad at quoting.) I can't pick my favourite and I'm squealing because I'm thinking of so many more scenes.
Thanks to this little masterpiece, I ship Brotp!Navia just as much as Brotp!Gajuvia, and I have you to worship for it.
Immediately favouriting this and keeping it forever. Nalu epilogue hitting me right in the feels at the moment. Excuse while I reread this heavenly gift granted upon us unworthy readers. Love you!
LaminateGem12 chapter 6 . 4/7/2016
Oh, thank Mavis I was wrong. Thank yoooouuuu
Dey just friends.
This chapter made me laugh so hard I literally fell off my bed (plus my dog was lying on top of me before I fell and landed paws first into my gut and EVERYTHING HURTS).
I better go finish the story now...

...But seriously Gray, if you flip out every time Juvia makes a friend; your brain may just explode.
LaminateGem12 chapter 5 . 4/7/2016
Oh Mavis, it's really obvious what that little shit is going to write about from the quirks in the interview he took note of. PLEASE LET ME BE WRONG, HE PROMISED HE WOULDN'T WRITE ABOUT FAKE RELATIONSHIPS ANYMORE DX
Faisalliot chapter 8 . 12/28/2015
WAIT THIS IS YOUR FIRST FT FANFIC?! HOLY SHIT YOU'RE A GOOOODDDDDDDDDDDD
But seriously, I loved it!
apitatoor chapter 8 . 12/27/2015
Hello again!
Thanks you for the updates!
Plus, sorry for the late reply!
I loved the last two chapters! They were really good!
I am happy for both of them!
I loved the Navia friendship in this story & am a little sad that the story is completed & has ended!
But, through the whole story, I had a lot of fun!
You wrote a pretty awesome story!
So, wishing you best of luck for your future stories!
So, till next time,bye!
Jordan chapter 8 . 12/27/2015
Ahhh the suspense! But I'm glad you ended it there. You're an incredible writer. I stuck with this through the entire thing. It got better as it went. I hope you make another Fairy Tail Story. Was a fun, and different(first Natsu and Juvia story I've read and I liked it) sad it's over though
Jordan chapter 7 . 12/26/2015
This was a really good story, I've stuck with it since the beginning and was surprised to see new chapters yesterday and today. But man oh man! Nalus next! I can't be the only one that loves that ship more than Gray likes stripping right! Lol sorry went rambling there. Anyway I Reaaallly loved the story and would love to see more like it from you. Also can't wait for tomorrow's chapter, sounds like its gonna be great from the build up with that necklace!
Scarlet Ruby Rose chapter 6 . 12/24/2015
Heheheh I love how Juvia and Natsu kinda have like a bro/sis relationship it's cute
dark queen of awesomeness chapter 6 . 12/24/2015
Ahhhhh so good! I can't wait to see Lucy's reaction ;)
apitatoor chapter 6 . 12/24/2015
Hello again!
Thanks for the update!
This chapter was so amazing! I totally loved it!
I really enjoyed reading this chapter! It was so fun!
It was a complete package!
You are awesome! From start till end it was so good!
I seriously, love the Navia friendship here! I like how they interact with each other & understand so much! They are very compatible!
They made me laugh so much! I really enjoyed reading them & supporting each other!
I loved each & everything about them! So, the whole chapter is my favorite!
Plus, Gray feeling jealous! Was really cute! I mean, he was in a daze & he couldn't believe it, which resulted in almost making the guild into an ice castle!
So that was really good!
Plus, loved the Gale conversations as well!
Gajeel was so funny! Him feeling left out & supporting Juvia & talking so nicely of her is really adorable!
Plus, Levy being in the mix, just made the conversations even more funnier!
Then Cana & Mira! It was amazing!
I felt this chapter was so fun that I will read it again!
So hats off to you! You nailed this chapter!
So can't wait for the next one!
So till next time,bye!
Guest chapter 6 . 12/24/2015
Dawww, that was a really cute chapter. Thank you! (And merry Christmas/happy whatever holidays you celebrate at this time of year/happy day if you just don't celebrate anything!)
harmonxx chapter 5 . 7/23/2015
Ooh, this was so good! I really can't wait to see what happens next! I hope the next chapter comes soon. I'm loving how you capture the friendship between Natsu and Juvia. Honestly, these two dorks would be awesome friends and I really hope Mashima-sensei puts some Gajuvia and Navia brOTP soon. Both of these brOTPs are just so awesome and I hope we get to see them as canon soon. But whatever. Anyways, great job on this fight and I'm really wondering what will happen when Fairy Tail sees this issue of Sorcerer's Weekly. (Add in a jealous Gajeel, please? There's nothing better than Gajeel getting jealous over Juvia becoming best friends with other people. Especially Natsu.)
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