OMG This is so cool and adorable, I love the mashup of TMNT and GotG, this was awesome you're an amazing writer

First, English isn't my language, so know that if some sentence in this review are kind of akward, it is by lack of words to express myself.

Your alternate universes are simply ''wow''. Honestly, with your avatar fusion and this? I rather like that role weren't that set and so they weren,t carbon copy of the movie, it's nice and it feel like you take the universe, understand it and make something out of it instead of some writer that only that a movie script and replace name. You? I feel like you stay fidel to both the caracters (TMNT) and the movie. The only thing i cringe a little at it the fact that Slash doesn't seem to have anything to do with Raph. With don't see much of Raph and Don neither.

If you decide to expend even more this universe, could you please explain what happened with the prison thing? I mean since Leo and Mikey are both Peter and Gamora, did they knew of the orb being a weapon? And when did they learn of the Shredder's plan? Also, since Casey, Raph and Don are Nova Corps I'm not too sure what happen with the jail thing. Did they somehow arrest Leo and Mikey without knowing and protested the arrestation once knowing and so were also sentenced for troubling peace and helping criminals. or did Casey arrest them and once Don and Raph learned of it and recognised them they made a plan to break them out of jail?

Before I insisted that I loved all your fusion universe, that's a little lie by omission. I love all your TMNT stories (didn't read another category so do not know about others) And I really like the way you write. So thank you for writing stories and I hope that you will continue to write TMNT stories

Ok hear me out. I have to start this review with the fact that I thought it would have been better if they had switched places. Leo being the one who had to meet karai and mikey being the one to save him.

I have a lot of reasons for this, among them being that the conversation btw karai and leo would have struck a deeper cord with readers especially since in all incarnations there IS something going on btw them. So the line "I hated you least" would have sounded a lot better directed at leo.

Secondly I already pictured mikey as star lord from the last fic so it was sort of difficult for me to picture him as gamora in this one.

Third it would have still worked with the narration you wanted with their places switched. Leo could have still had the thoughts he was having about mikey if he was the one who couldn't shake them off. In fact I think it would have been just as heart wrenching because leo cannot survive in a world with no mikey. Like literally he would shrivel and burn out And that fits with how he NEEDs mikey to survive to keep them all afloat. To keep them moving forward and if he's just another chess piece that needs to go to ensure that, it was enough. In a way it's an oxymoron of selfish and selflessness

I have loads of other reasons but I'm gonna go ahead instead with the fact that I MUST give you props for making the scene work.

I guess I can understand the angle you were aiming for and in many ways it worked really well if not perfectly and the best part is that despite everything, everyone IS in character. I especially loved that there was a comparison about how leo felt about mikey specifically because leo's been with mikey way more than his other brothers in your au so it's understandable why he feels the way he feels. He knows his brothers can tale care of himself but mikey is just there for him specifically to protect and he needs that.

Awesome second part to your other fic. I really liked it and can see why Leo would be frantic about Mikey. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Yes hello this is my favorite and so are you. I honestly really love this au, as I think you are aware at this point, and this piece is no exception.

Like. Leo having fun playing wrecking ball was adorable, and Mikey and Casey being buddies was even moreso (and I feel like it prob made Raph really happy that his buddy clicked so well with his baby bro...though, I'm p sure he (and Don) weren't thrilled about Casey apparently getting them sent to jail apparently?)

AND KARAI holy cats. "Of all our siblings, I always hated you least," and Casey not knowing what to do or say cause he's NEW to Leo and Mikey but he probably knows them so WELL, just from the stories and jokes and soft remarks Don and Raph always had about them in spades, AND LEO, who didn't wanna die, but even more than that, he didn't wanna live without Mikey cause they'd been through everything together, asdfjfls. It kind of tied really well into the first installment, when Leo was begging Mikey to take his hand, because "I cant do this without you" or w/e, but Mikey hasn't really cottoned on to how important he is to them in that regard, he doesn't quite grasp how much brave, infallible Leonardo NEEDS him, how much a cornerstone to his brother he's become, and just... D:

Anyway yeah this is perfect to me. THANK YOU AGAIN.