Reviews for Power Over The Mind
HufflepuffSerenity chapter 4 . 6/21/2015
Omg are you from nh? Cause I actually know what address!
She-WolfMoon chapter 4 . 6/20/2015
Loves it all already!
oaiv chapter 2 . 6/15/2015
this is great i just wish the chapter is longer
Day chapter 2 . 6/15/2015
Wow that is interesting lol I wonder how this story will continue! Please update soon!
oe chapter 1 . 6/15/2015
this seems good cant wait for more
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2015
this seems good!
Lightblade23 chapter 3 . 6/17/2015
I recomend to make a background check on the movies and give the protagonist the same knowledge public gets after a catastrophe. For example: How would she know pietro is wanda's brother? Or How does she know who is falcon and The Vision? Since both never have been in the public eye. Or how does she knows the powers of wanda? Take note on what a "regular person" knows and add it to the main character. Dont throw all the info known in the movies. Also remember character development, and characterization is important because the protagonist changed a lot from chapter 1 to 3 with nothing happening and give the mother some character development because keeping a super power secret for 17 or so years it makes people insecurity about telling that. Just a thought
AvengerFrost chapter 1 . 6/14/2015
I'd say this story sounds pretty interesting so far keep up the great work.