A interesting story. This was a pretty good oneshot of the challenge as it was pretty detailed about the situations and how there is t much about technological advances like in canon. Superpowers being more prevalent with the royal family and how they took control of Japan was interesting as well as how strong four of the children are. Lelouch' powers is interesting and how he gathers a group of people with the hair color and name them as such was amusing. This is quite different from others that is for sure. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the good work.

This is definitely an amusing and interesting idea. I'd like to see someone try this. Though you may want to go through the last part where you explain the challenge and do some editing. Some parts were really hard to understand, especially where you were explaining which knights have which powers.

Very interesting take on CG

Cool start, maybe you could not refer so much to comic books in your suit descriptions as your writing is already very comic-like.

If the zero suit is to be upgraded regularly, I guess having new gadgets each battle is not too much of an a$$-pull. It's not even an issue, same thing happens in comic books.

But then you might want to work on the description/character introductions. Those are a stapple of comic books, often being covers or full pages. The Zero, knights of color and Suzaku parts might need a rewrite, and you should give one to Clovis too. (Note : the Suzaku introduction was really good already, really cinematographic). Do not hesitate to make everybody hammy.

Will Rolo really be Lelouch and Nunally's abducted brother this time ? Can't wait to see.

Wow This has a LOT of potential you should really think of continuing this your self because this is just plain awesome. If this is taken up by some one else I hope they do it justice.

I really hope someone (maybe even you) continues this. I would, but my hands are full with my own stories.

More cabbages, please. onegai shimasu

An interesting concept and if I weren't already busy with my own stories I'd tackle this.