I honestly cannot wait for more of this

looking forward to laxus possibly joining the slayer as the lightning dragon slayer

Good story, please write more

Come back and continue writing this story please

Dude this story is awesome! Like most of the others! I have to say the way the characters interact is my favorite! It's so good! Keep it up bud!

Liking the OC Fire devil slayer. Could had a bit more natsuxchelia time but it's still a phenomenal chapter!

Damn son that's some brutal shit! I love it! This story is amazing! Like Chelia in this one too she boss bro!

Please update!

Please don't abandon

ah here is where fanfiction really shines! When you kill characters that have a relatively big effect on the series. Poor Jellal you shall be slightly missed.

Excellent story just read through it all these last two days and definitly worthwhile

Let me guess.
Natsu is 400 years old and he probably know about the END part, which is why he can eat fire devil slayer flames because he is fire devil himself after all. That, or Natsu is 400 year old slayer who fought in the war against Zeref, but that's not likely.
The 1st and 3rd Gen. Dragon slayer are probably about 300 year old and didn't travel through eclipse gate.
The rest slayers may or may not be over 100 year, right?
Make sure to save ultear and not have her die the same way as jellal, use Ur, she's alive might as well use her.
And.. I've a question that might have been answered in story itself, are Wendy and Chelia's figures same as canon? Or are they grown up girls?
And please make it so that atleast fairy tail don't treat v the slayers poorly, and I mean whole guild.
On yes I forgot the most important thing... Please please please make it so that happy went to edolas and then bring him back, without happy it's just not fairy tail anymore, please do anything you can to bring him back. You don't even need to do whole edolas arc just make it that happy flew back to earthland and it took him 2 year to find a way to do that. Please.

Huh I was wondering how you were going to do the battle of fairy tail. Can't wait to see how Natsu handles the raijenshu and laxus. Also wondering if he is even going to try against them or just gonna let the other slayers have fun. And will gray ever get passed his anger to the slayers.

Good job. please update at your own pace. this is an amazing story. (sorry for lack of a better compliment my other hand is holding a baby. also this is a really good fanfic

Hmm a couple of suggestions. Sometimes you confuse exclamation and questions marks and their placement. Like a made up example "Why would he do that, he didn't need to?" instead of "Why would he do that?! He didn't need to!" The tone of the first one is doubt, the second one is more of shock.

And in dialogue, something that happens in your other stories, is that it tends to be a long wall of text or info dump. Sometimes it feels like the characters are just trying to push all the explanation in a single speech and it feels unnatural sometimes. Try to show more emotions than "with a grin". Show them frowning mid speech to show how the stories affects them for example. More "show, don't tell".

The story it self is great, I'm really enjoying it. I would recommend using stuff like Ginger and Grammarly to spellcheck it. Other than that, good job.