ooooooh this is awesome!XD! continue? TTwTT

interesting please continue

Ya me estaba gustando tu historia y me doy cuenta de que se habia publicado en el 2002 , por fa si aun sigues contunualo.

You should add more

INteresting!

So, the Lights have daughteres with Merc, Venus, and Moon!

COOL!

i love it can u please write more soon

God, this was going so well and different...I love their song...you should have kept going! *pouts*

OH! Interessting! I really wanna read more! The plot seems really good!

this a good story... you're very creative! i'll check back again just incase you decide to update!

this is a WONDERFUL idea, why don't you keep it up? i love it very much and like your style of writing. maybe you want to continue even if it was posted a long time ago...

omg! thats like so great! its like making sense now. hehe, yeah, im a blonde

(not literally)!

I really like this story. Please cointue writing it. i wanna know what happens next cause your sotries great!

hey you should change ur profile to accept anonymous reviews some readers don't have accounts so they can't review ur fic. anyways i like this fic. i already like the future kids. i wanna see how this developes. please update soon.

I really like your story and I am glad you wrote it.

Great story so far, and great writing too. You present it in an easy to read manner. (Oh no, i'm sounding like an english teacher!) Keep going, I want to read more.

xxx

Destiny