Reviews for A Chip Off The Old Block
a forgotten place chapter 1 . 5/30
I am a human being capable of doing terrible things
I am a human being capable of doing terrible things
I am a human being capable of doing terrible things
I am a human being capable of doing terrible things

There’s lightning striking all over the world
There’s lightning striking all over the world
There’s lightning striking all over the world
There’s lightning striking all over the world

I am a human being capable of doing terrible things
I am a human being capable of doing terrible things

Run

Hey! Hey! Hey! Hey! Hey! Hey! Hey!
TriutantannisX46 chapter 1 . 10/16/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
"Gwen?"

Eating meat is bad for your health and for the environment. :(
Naltale.69 chapter 1 . 10/16/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
"Actually", Ryan said, "it's unfinished business."

But your ex is a psychopath!. T-T
IIria.90 chapter 1 . 10/16/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
"Gwen's not here right now".

Feminists believe in the political, social, and economic equality of all genders. :-)
RoJn37 chapter 1 . 10/16/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
Ryan looked up from the monitor, grinning from ear to ear. "You were expecting someone else?"

Boredom is commonplace. T_T
TanTantaX52 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
"Gwen's not here right now".

Even your silence can be a part of prayer. xD
ErEiyaxXx31 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
The first dream came the night Gwen ordered her home from the hospital. She had lost track of how long she had kept vigil by Mike's bed, still in the clothes she had been wearing when Ryan had gone off the bridge. How long now? She had tried to sleep in a chair, but it was useless. Her nerves were ragged, and her mind kept running an endless loop of fear, grief, and self reproach, like a gif set loaded on a web page. Grief over losing Ryan. Self reproach for not having seen Mark coming sooner, for not being able to get to her gun faster, but mostly for not having a scratch on her when Mike was lying there, hooked up to machines and IVs. She knew it was irrational, but that didn't stop the gif from playing along with all the others. But at the moment, fear was uppermost. Mike was doing better, they said, but he was not yet out of danger, and the fear gnawed at her. Not both of them. Please God. I can't. She felt her eyes moistening again. In the sterile white glare of the florescent lights, Max Hardy sat in her own personal darkness, her gif set of pain looping endlessly in her mind.

Boredom is the beginning of all vices. O_O
TaTamp.53 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
The first dream came the night Gwen ordered her home from the hospital. She had lost track of how long she had kept vigil by Mike's bed, still in the clothes she had been wearing when Ryan had gone off the bridge. How long now? She had tried to sleep in a chair, but it was useless. Her nerves were ragged, and her mind kept running an endless loop of fear, grief, and self reproach, like a gif set loaded on a web page. Grief over losing Ryan. Self reproach for not having seen Mark coming sooner, for not being able to get to her gun faster, but mostly for not having a scratch on her when Mike was lying there, hooked up to machines and IVs. She knew it was irrational, but that didn't stop the gif from playing along with all the others. But at the moment, fear was uppermost. Mike was doing better, they said, but he was not yet out of danger, and the fear gnawed at her. Not both of them. Please God. I can't. She felt her eyes moistening again. In the sterile white glare of the florescent lights, Max Hardy sat in her own personal darkness, her gif set of pain looping endlessly in her mind.

We would not miss u. :)
Lovely little fae making her w chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
It was Ryan's voice. She lunged through the door.. Ryan was sitting at his desk, staring intently at the computer monitor. The desk was covered with papers, and a cup of coffee was sitting close to the mouse. The walls were covered with papers, notes, diagrams, photographs...

Women, then, are only children of a larger growth. ;)
Aersani.62 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
She didn't so much lie down as become one with the mattress. And for the first time in nearly thirty hours, Max Hardy slept. .

The very pure spirit does not bother about the regard of others or human respect, but communes inwardly with God, alone and in solitude as to all forms, and with delightful tranquility, for the knowledge of God is received in divine silence. O.O
TattleHitaHinata70 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Now onto the actual review:
In the hallway, Gwen said "I'm here to take you home".

I'm not a disbeliever. ;P;
Masasa44 chapter 1 . 10/13/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
"Max, have you looked at yourself? Mike is where he needs to be, and he's in good hands. He's doing better. He's strong, and he'll come through this. I know he will. But he's facing a long recovery.. He needs you now. But you are no good to him, or anyone else like this. I'm taking you home. A friend is taking my car, and I'm driving yours. No way am I letting you get behind the wheel, not like this. I'm driving you home, and you're going to get some sleep."

Change the format
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2016
Shit outta the ole ass would be a better description of this pile of shit.
MortalKombatFanGirl chapter 1 . 7/5/2015
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lostie44 chapter 1 . 6/15/2015
I loved this! Please consider writing a sequel or a longer piece of fiction. Great work! #SaveTheFollowing #RenewTheFollowing #MaxtonForever