Reviews for On the Horizon
speaker24 chapter 1 . 2/24/2017
Wow you can see the difference in your writing and it's nice that we get more intricate backstory. Can't wait to see more!
S chapter 4 . 2/20/2016
I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Mysine chapter 4 . 9/20/2015
Ooo this is getting interesting. Please keep up the good job.
Sidekicks-anonymous chapter 4 . 9/19/2015
*gasp!* A skilled apprentice? Like... Prowl? This will be interesting to see.
Charizgrovsion chapter 4 . 9/19/2015
Interesting and good
Mysine chapter 3 . 8/10/2015
Great story so far! Please keep up the great work.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/8/2015
really well written!
Child of Jon Snow chapter 3 . 8/6/2015
im guessing that was interlock wasnt it talking to the bot and he lied oh cant wait for next chappie
ha prowls going to be groucy?
Mysine chapter 2 . 7/27/2015
Like the story so far! Please update as soon as possible.
Child of Jon Snow chapter 2 . 7/23/2015
so he met da hatchet oh cool and how the heck did ratch no his name before he said anything?
ooohhhhh cant wait for chapter 3 please hurry!
Child of Jon Snow chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
Oh cool love prowl origins story's update soon
Kitty Kat chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
You're amazing! I love it so far, I know you didn't write much yet but still, it's good :D keep going
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
Great start, only a few minor mistakes.
C