Reviews for On the Horizon |
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speaker24 chapter 1 . 2/24/2017 Wow you can see the difference in your writing and it's nice that we get more intricate backstory. Can't wait to see more! |
S chapter 4 . 2/20/2016 I can't wait to find out what happens next! |
Mysine chapter 4 . 9/20/2015 Ooo this is getting interesting. Please keep up the good job. |
Sidekicks-anonymous chapter 4 . 9/19/2015 *gasp!* A skilled apprentice? Like... Prowl? This will be interesting to see. |
Charizgrovsion chapter 4 . 9/19/2015 Interesting and good |
Mysine chapter 3 . 8/10/2015 Great story so far! Please keep up the great work. |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/8/2015 really well written! |
Child of Jon Snow chapter 3 . 8/6/2015 im guessing that was interlock wasnt it talking to the bot and he lied oh cant wait for next chappie ha prowls going to be groucy? |
Mysine chapter 2 . 7/27/2015 Like the story so far! Please update as soon as possible. |
Child of Jon Snow chapter 2 . 7/23/2015 so he met da hatchet oh cool and how the heck did ratch no his name before he said anything? ooohhhhh cant wait for chapter 3 please hurry! |
Child of Jon Snow chapter 1 . 7/10/2015 Oh cool love prowl origins story's update soon |
Kitty Kat chapter 1 . 6/19/2015 You're amazing! I love it so far, I know you didn't write much yet but still, it's good :D keep going |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2015 Great start, only a few minor mistakes. C |