That was great! I loved when Jonas was drugged up and the part where he was drunk, absolutely hysterical! I loved the whole thing actually, again great! :)

Wow. Finally read all of this. It was brilliant. So funny all throughout and sad in the sad parts, happy in the happy parts. I loved it. It was an interesting interpretation of Jonas's charater when he relaxes enough to let loose a bit. I wish it had happened on the show more like your story, with Jonas staying after Daniel came back. Its not unusual to have five member teams so I don't see why they didn't keep him, he was so awesome.

He had such a great relationship with all of them which you showed in this story, a younger sibling to Sam and Telc which brought out interesting sides in both of them.

In short great story. I only wish there were like a million stories just as good about Jonas so that I could be set for great jonas fiction to read.

This is a very nicely done story - your mechanics of story telling are excellent - the characterizations are great, the situations plausible - Bravo, I say, Bravo!

I LOVED THIS! your sucha good writer. thanks for the jonas story!

ah, ah,oh boy this is INTENSE!

JERK!

that is all.

WHAT? ah, man, wow you just jump from one thing to another don't you?"

Ok, back to reading.

P.S

you remind me of my style of writing

Could you be anymore depressing?

Great stuff I guess (Sigh)

This chapter is intriguing

I am going to read more now, so excuse me.

I read all your fanfiction in the afternoon. Your story is really wonderful!

I am so glad that you decided to finish this story!

I was always happy to see a new chapter waiting for me in my email :)

Thank You for sharing this.

I love the quick updating, but it's never fun when a story's ended. As for the sequel: bring it on ASAP! I wanna see Jonas cause more earthquakes and make more things fly! (silly grin)

Have a nice day!

XD

beautiful finally Jonas share with SG1 part of his life, a good way to heal. Love the scene and everything in there.

Excellent job CONGRATULATIONS¡

Wow you have a truly wonderfully written story here. Thank you so much for sharing it and finishing it :D Loved all the humor and the drama, even the heart wrenching parts... The ending was perfect and loved it, though I can't help but wish this wasn't the last chapter. Absolutely loved Jonas finally sharing his past with the team. Jack's line about acknowledging Jonas is smarter than him was great. Would really love to read a sequel or any other stories you come up with next. Will definitely be keeping my eye out for your new Jonas story. Once again thanks for all the laughs, tears, and overall joy from reading your story. Take care.

This story has been absolutely amazing. You did an excellent job of covering the various emotions of the story. The funny chapters (especially Jonas in the infirmary) were absolutely hilarious. You put in just enough angst to make me want to cry but not so much that I wanted to hate you, and you brought it to a happy ending (without having some ridiculous plot device). Every time I saw the story alert in my inbox, it made me extremely happy. I'm so sad that this story is ending. I can't wait to read your next story!