Really like how you captured their romance, Andy's patience and Sharon's internal conflict. Nice!

So much beautiful imagery in this! The gods, the rain hiding her tears from the mere mortals she doesn't want to show what she perceives likely as weakness to, and I especially loved the web and then the cocoon metaphor Rusty witnessed as the wind blew her hair around her and Andy. "Fear was replaced by courage, sadness by hope...The tears were for them now." LOVED THIS! I think this is my favorite line of all though as said by Andy: "Don't run because you think I will." Sigh. I just loved it all!

Love your work, ProfTweety. I'd so love to see this scene in next week's MC!

Awe I really like the rain! I'm glad that Sharon now has good memories to go with the rain! Great story! Thanks for sharing!

Absolutely beautiful! I would agree about the rain. I like to hide in it myself sometimes. I would say this is one of my very favorites of yours. Thank you for sharing.

I wish the show moved along with scenes like this!

This was so good. Such a great read! You are amazing!

reading your story this lyrics pop in my head
...Rainy days never say goodbye
To desire when we are together
Rainy days growing in your eyes
Tell me where's my way...

Very melanchonic mood. Thank you for sharing :)

So much emotion, How I would love to see some of this on the show.

Loooovvvveeedddd it ! Loved the idea of Sharon crying and Andy comforting her .

Such a beautiful piece! I love how you reveal the tie between her memories and the rain and how she always lets the rain wash away her tears. And then Andy is there and helps her make happy memories. He's such a sweetheart! Sometimes all it takes is someone who won't leave even if the going gets tough and it's wonderful that Andy is that person for her and that she recognizes it. Thank you so much for sharing!

This was beautiful! The Rain intertwined with her raw emotions was perfect! Andy being the understanding guy, just makes me live him so much more than I already do. I'm so happy that she is willing to work towards her happiness with him and not run away. I love how you incorporated what Duff said about Rusty's uncertainty at their physical aspect of their relationship.