Reviews for Percy Jackson, Betrayal Starts It All
Shadow chapter 16 . 7/7/2019
Okay. This is fucking AMAZING. Please dont tell me its on hiatus. I'm addicted. Istg this shit is dope. Please update more often and I am being honest with u. This is 1 of the best fanfictions I have come across.
Guest chapter 8 . 4/26/2019
What the hellllllllllllll so many people voting for bianca and little for Thaila but at least it's not Artimis she acts like a bitch when her boy/man hating mode by the way love fanfiction
Guest chapter 7 . 4/26/2019
Hi your fanfic so are awesome but can it be when he's the heir of chaos by the way I choose Thaila please I love and and this is on my top ten fanfiction
Mos99 chapter 16 . 1/16/2019
Thank you for this fantastic story! I am looking forward to the next chapter.
thunderofdeath97 chapter 16 . 1/12/2019
in this fic it could have been ouranos trying to kill percy, but i thought it was zeus in the book trying to kill thalia, because kronos doesnt have that power so it had to be zeus right?
thunderofdeath97 chapter 15 . 1/12/2019
i know the prophecy was refering to luke in the fourth or fifth line when it says a single shoice shall end his days, but for the gods and the demigods who didnt know that, then that should have been their biggest clue lol
True Wielder of Riptide chapter 16 . 1/5/2019
Well, the moment of truth, i asked about this moment in one of my first reviews on the story, i guess we learn the answer next chapter. Keep up the good work
True Wielder of Riptide
Da surviver chapter 15 . 12/30/2018
Grate chapter. Happy to see it being updated again.
ThunderSphinx chapter 13 . 10/27/2018
Awww, why no update? I finally find a Percy/Hemera story and it's abandoned? :(
Mos99 chapter 13 . 9/8/2018
Thank you for this fantastic story!

I would love to see an update in the near future.
RED2017 chapter 13 . 8/7/2017
Hey bro (or sis), I will just be honest I literally forgot about this story. But here I am almost a year later reviewing it. Really awesome story. Just hope you dont stop. Also hoping you will update soon. The one and only RED
thunderofdeath97 chapter 13 . 8/2/2017
oh pairings for percy include thalassa, hemera, rhea, gaea, nyx, medusa, athena, leto, selene, artemis, zoe, bianca, kinzie, hyllla, bellona, reyna, lupa, asteria, tethys, demeter, nike, eris, iris, calypso, styx, circe, hecate, thalia, khione, katie, other goddesses from other pantheons, other titanesses, hestia, just some suggestions
aRTsyisAwesome chapter 13 . 2/21/2017
Oops I posted this for the wrong chapter and Iḿ worried u wont see it so iḿ posting it again. This is literally the best story Ie ever read! I love the end of the chapter, so nerve-wracking! I personally don ike the Hemera/Percy Ship because technically they are siblings, and that could get awkward. I also don like the bianca ship because I feel like they also have a sibling relatinsship. I also am against painring with the hunters because I respect their vow. Sorry but I am a strong percabeth shipper, but if I had to choose I would pick Thalia since she didntake the vow yet,
Abyways I love the writing, and I just loved the way you ended it with percy meeting his alter ego or what ever you call it. Maybe you could make percy start to slowly gain his Primordial powers back over time, at random bursts or when heś in danger, like now. You could also try and make it seem as if the two percys have an internal stuggle over dominance or something like that.
I am thankful that you didn kill Bianca, i hated how Rick killed her off so early on, we didn even get to know her that well, ad I feel like if she lived then Nico would have a chance at a happy life, and bianca could become powerful.
I have read almost every story related to the percy Jakson fandom, and I can say yours by far is the most unique and exciting story in here! I love how you portray each of the haracters, and stick to the storyline but improve it. I am ging to favorite you and follow you and everything! :) I also like how you are dedicated to your writing even if your sick, my condolenses by the way.
I also like how you respod to the reviews, and you have a great sence of humor, I can tell in your story. U can tell if this is a god story, because I only review stories that I abslutely love and cannot wait for. Sorry Iḿ just rambling now but think of this as a makeup review for all the others I missed. ;). Peace!
aRTsyisAwesome chapter 12 . 2/21/2017
This is literally the best story Ie ever read! I love the end of the chapter, so nerve-wracking! I personally don ike the Hemera/Percy Ship because technically they are siblings, and that could get awkward. I also don like the bianca ship because I feel like they also have a sibling relatinsship. I also am against painring with the hunters because I respect their vow. Sorry but I am a strong percabeth shipper, but if I had to choose I would pick Thalia since she didntake the vow yet,
Abyways I love the writing, and I just loved the way you ended it with percy meeting his alter ego or what ever you call it. Maybe you could make percy start to slowly gain his Primordial powers back over time, at random bursts or when heś in danger, like now. You could also try and make it seem as if the two percys have an internal stuggle over dominance or something like that.
I am thankful that you didn kill Bianca, i hated how Rick killed her off so early on, we didn even get to know her that well, ad I feel like if she lived then Nico would have a chance at a happy life, and bianca could become powerful.
I have read almost every story related to the percy Jakson fandom, and I can say yours by far is the most unique and exciting story in here! I love how you portray each of the haracters, and stick to the storyline but improve it. I am ging to favorite you and follow you and everything! :) I also like how you are dedicated to your writing even if your sick, my condolenses by the way.
I also like how you respod to the reviews, and you have a great sence of humor, I can tell in your story. U can tell if this is a god story, because I only review stories that I abslutely love and cannot wait for. Sorry Iḿ just rambling now but think of this as a makeup review for all the others I missed. ;). Peace!
Guest chapter 13 . 2/13/2017
More chapters plsss I'm dying
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