Reviews for Mass Effect Prime
Detective Raven chapter 1 . 2/4/2018
I love this story! I hope you will be continuing the story it's got a lot of potential.
CJ-T-Bone chapter 3 . 1/4/2017
leave it to tali to rebuild a cybertronian with a microqave and a coffee machine. brilliant work little quarian.
Roaming-Guardian chapter 3 . 12/14/2016
You are now under moral obligation as an underrepresented subset of the human population (good fanfic writters) to provide your public with more. Dissension will be met with begging, bargaining, diplomacy, ass-kissing, and or human sacrifice until such time as a new chapter is released. Have a pleasant day.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/2/2016
Hahahaha, the "Organics!" line never gets old.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/2/2016
I hope you decide to continue your version of this crossover, because it is awesome and interesting what you've done so far.
blaiseingfire chapter 3 . 8/24/2015
EEK AI
EEEK ORGANICS
10/10
Prototron MJ Tornada chapter 3 . 7/31/2015
Perfect first introductions. "AI"! "ORGANICS"! "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH"!
Robo Reader 21 chapter 3 . 7/12/2015
Okay, way too much fat in the writing.

I'd imagine hacking Cybertronian tech would be a greater challenge than Geth. Not saying they can't hack them after all they've been studying them for centuries but don't make it sounds so lightly. Pretty clever how Cybertronian computers only respond to spark signatures. Also, I believe all species have their own coffee. Turians have chocolate so its not hard to believe.

The Matrix should'a urged or vaguely eluded to Shepard that Arcee was important. Also, ten autobots with who knows how many others sent to Thessia. Oh, boy, Arcee is gonna have some words to say. And her reaction was hilarious but correction Arcee was in the games. She's a DLC character and there's a profile on her part in how she was one of the prisoners at Kaon prison but escaped with Optimus and his team let themselves get capture to save Zeta Prime.

Let me get this straight. The Matrix was manipulating caffeine-high Tali...completely not something in its power but I'll go with it cause it was kinda funny.

The Autobot and Decepticon Codex entry is pretty tight. Some problems, big one being the Decepticon codex. It shoulda ended at the talk about reverse-engineering their more exotic weapon and armor.
Telron chapter 3 . 7/12/2015
LOL great chapter and a Tali that is high is an epic awesome Tali
1v2 chapter 3 . 7/12/2015
oh man i love this fic so far can't wait to see what happens next
Guest chapter 2 . 6/29/2015
Cant wait for when the citadel races meet the "prothens"
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2015
Wrex ridng grimlock would be the most awesome thing ever they should make that
Telron chapter 2 . 6/30/2015
interesting and good story so far
Robo Reader 21 chapter 2 . 6/29/2015
Well, if there were doubts before I can safely say it obvious who Sovereign really is. Seriously though, poor Magnus. He's a good bot, in the novels he and some Autobots, including the Wreakers, remained on Cybertron. They even managed to trip up Trypticon to allow the Ark to leave the planet.

They think that the sparkless shell of Transformers are are VI drones! That's insulting. No bot, no matter the affiliation would like that. Especially Cons.

They have files of the Iacon archives!? How long have they had that? Either way, if they can decode those, find artifacts, well the artifacts of the Primes they can't use but any Decepticon weapons would be great trouble.

Makes sense to use Therum. Surprise Shepard could tell that it's one of the planets for Project Vendetta considering all she saw was a map with no names or coordinates. Even if they were names, they wouldn't be called by what humans and others call them. The Matrix works by giving a sense of feeling. Optimus knew where to go and who could be important by the Matrix nudging him in direction without really knowing. You got a clever idea with how Shepard can use it but she needs to bring it with her. Thing doesn't give out exact coordinates after all.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
Wrex grimlock make it happen
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