Love your writing! This whole scene with Minori was crazy, and it was good to see what her perspective was on the whole thing. I'm really excited to see how it turns out in the long run! Thanks for writing :)

aaaa! This is such a wonderful fic! The writing is amazing like aldante spagetti! : ) ! : )
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I loved this chapter! The whole group interacting is too sweet. I'm glad to see Fritz feeling a little better, too. Thanks for writing!

Yessss you finally updated :D

Funny that you updated this morning! I was thinking about your story a few days ago while I was playing the game and thought "she hasn't updated in a while!" So I was so happy to see in my email this morning that you had actually updated! What a treat! :D
This was a nice, juicy chapter. At some points, I did get confused when it went back and forth with the flashbacks. Forgive me if I missed something, but it started to make sense towards the end. I hope that the pond did heal some or most of her condition. I really enjoyed that part singing in the moonlight as she swam in the pond! At least the town sees that Raeger and Elise action! I really want them to get together! You wrote Corona's part very well! And of course, the drama between Minori and Johnny was great! I wonder how he'll respond to finding out (if he does) that her and Nadi shared the same bed? That last part got me though! I was like "finally! Yes!" lol Now I need to know what happens the next morning!
Also, of course Minori assumed that Nadi had drugged her (although her feelings were very valid), but of course, the lovable Nadi could never do that! I did enjoy the effort he put into her this chapter. Update soon! :)

This story is freaking amazing so far :3

Happy to see that you updated!

I liked the Minori/Nadi interaction. It was cute seeing them dance with each other next to the moonlit lake, but sad to see that even when she was awake, at the strike of midnight, she forgot him. The flashback answered how close Johnny and Annie really used to be and it's obvious that he's still miffed over what had happened. I wonder what you have planned for him and Nadi's friendship. Nadi didn't pay Annie much mind in the past and now he's slowly falling for her. I'm looking forward to seeing how you'll progress everyone's relationships. Update soon!

Wow! Victor has really gone off the deep end threatening Elise and trying to kill her again! I"m glad that she had Raeger to help her. Also I totally want Raeger x Elise to happen! Lillie is okay and I feel sorry for her that Raeger hasn't had much time for her, but I feel like she's not right for him. It was nice to see flashbacks between them, when Victor was sane. Can't wait for the next update!

Wow...didn't think that Fritz would have such a dark event in his past and him being as mean as a snake was unexpected, but kudos for showing that even the nicest people have their demons. Is the Elli in this story the same Elli from Mineral Town?

Yay! Nadi finally admits that he has feelings for Minori! I'm curious to read how his feelings will clash with Johnny and Fritz? I love how you've handled everyone's reactions to her secrets so far. Good job!

Wow! I wasn't expecting that her Johnny would be the doctor! Now his words with Nadi from an earlier chapter makes sense. Nice bombshell, by the way!

I loved how you weaved in all the other cities from the other games that Minori traveled to! I liked the interaction between her and Nadi. Great job!

Aww! And the romantic feelings start to show! Too bad for Fritz, though. Everything was lovely in this chapter!

I loved the fluff between everyone at the restaurant! Since Nadi is so curious about everyone, the town and Minori, I can't wait to read how their relationship develops.

I love what you're doing so far with the story. Nadi is my favorite bachelor for this series and you've done well with everyone. I didn't like Elise when I first started the game, but she grew on me once I raised my friendship with her. It was nice to see you write about her background story and how Nadi eventually came to Oak Tree Town to work for her. I felt sorry for Elise in your story, but her brother got what he deserved. And her mother is just a barrel of laughs! (not really). I'm looking forward to reading more. On to the next chapter!