I just wish I knew how this ended especially after investing all the time of reading it. I dont care if its rushed or just like a paragraph but like it ended on such a hard part to make your own ending.

I think the author has died or given up writing. Shame, you wrote the best Madoka Magica fanfics on the site.

Overall I think this is an interesting, engaging story. While I would prefer to see a competent, effective Homura I understand that basically the entire premise is based on her starting to unravel and make bad choices. So a lot of things that I would consider plot holes can be put down to Homura not thinking things through. Still stuff like making Madoka run across town while tied up when she could have just stuffed her in a car and drove, or staying in the city instead of leaving are still cringeworthy.
There are two issues that can’t be waved aside like the other can however. The first is why does Homura have to keep going out to get or steal things when she should already have a large stockpile of basically everything stored in her shield already. The second is the big one. Why hasn’t Kyubey found Madoka?! He can sense magical girls and potential magical girls. That’s basically his job and he’s always been able home in on any of the girls before. You don’t mention Homura doing anything to block him. She just took Madoka a couple of miles away and called it good. Kyubey should have been there that night to tempt Madoka into making a contract so she could escape.

I was going to read this, but the line from Homura's internal monologue about the "Love she deserved" threw me off. It's just... not really in character for her, at least the way I see her.

Wow, it's terrific to see this update! I'm glad that you're back with this new chapter. As usual, I'm loving the tension that is gradually building up, with Madoka's escape plan gearing up and Junko getting closer to the truth inch by inch. I'll be here eagerly waiting for your next update. My support goes to you and your stories.

Happy writing!

Glad you're back you're absolutely wonderful at keeping everyone in character

Yes yes yes! I need more. Cant wait to see where u take this. Its great

Yay consistent updates!

Very good job as always!

Nice

Oh jeez, Sayaka is gonna screw things up for Homura, isn't she?

I wonder how things are going to develop with Junko being a suspect now.

Really good chapter, had me on the edge of my seat. Can't wait to see what happens with Madoka's escape plan, although I honestly hope Homura can keep a handle on things until Walpurgisnacht.

The aunt IS poisoning her. That's really really bad. Come on Mama Nagisa. Don't die.

OMG, new chapter! I'm so hyped! I really can't tell you how much I love your story. 3

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Wow, this story is quite addicting! I flew through all 37 of these chapters last night in one go, it was that great. At the end of each chapter, I found myself unable to help myself from continuing to the next as I had to know what would happen!

Upon finishing the series, I also wondered about more extreme measures Homura could have employed to keep Madoka safe. Finding this story was quite a fun venture and brought to life in the best way possible the exploration of this potential timeline.

More specifically about this chapter, I really liked the idea Madoka had of creating her own tool for use on the door-I couldn't imagine being so clever, haha. I love that there isn't any rush to develop Madoka's feelings, that is, to advance the plot too quickly. It allows there to be so much more depth and creates a more natural development of events.

I'm honestly not sure I could sing enough praises for this story, but I'll leave it at that and save the rest for the next chapter! I will be looking forward to it when it comes.