I love your primeval stories, especially this one. I do wonder when Alice will make an appearance though not that she could or could not. keep up the good work!

I loved this preview. You should make a story out of this

I like this chapter, it adds to an amazing story in an interesting way. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the preview to be in effect, but I think that's a good thing because that means I read through the the whole chapter more thoroughly than if I didn't have something to look forward to. I am sure that the preview won't actually happen for a few more chapters, but this chapter was still cool in its rights.
Amazing story, awesome chapter, I wish you good luck with your story.

connor/stephen/becker

I love this chapter! Please update eventually. Also, Conner( Hatter) / Becker vote for me please.

Loved the update (and the length of it)!
I can completely understand how school gets in the way of writing...good luck with your studying, I'll be eagerly watching for a new chapter in a couple weeks! (:

Yes. Just yes.

Please continue this! It's really interesting!

So this is really amazing and I need more and was so disappointed when I saw you hadn't updated since October and I seriously need more

Love this

love this

Loooooooooove 3

Really like it

really good story, please can you post more often it is incredibly rare that any of the primeval or alice stories i follow actually post so it brings me great happiness to see yours updated.

I cant wait to find out your plan and love the comment that in wonderland they would have ran and how he still wasnt sure if it was just a creature from their.