I would like to see more of this; as someone who has traveled on a bus occasionally in her life before and who has been to Las Vegas twice. Who was talking at the end? I can guess that they were news-broadcasters. I can tell that it was Roderich that was using sign language to speak to the woman (I assume to be Elizaveta) he was with; is he deaf or mute?

This story is so good so far! I can't believe you left it at that! Hopefully it all turns out well for them in the end.

Wow I hope they all make it out ok, such an interesting plot though. For some reason I keep thinking that with them being out in the open and vulnerable, they're gonna be attacked by some kind of serial killer DX that's wat u watch criminal minds XD hope u update soon! :-)

OMG! Sweet! I really like the dynamic you've got going here! Please update soon! Cliffhangers are only fun when there is something to go after them...

I swear if the last chapter in this story doesn't end with a cliffhanger that you will never resolve, you are missing out on a opportunity here.

Anyway, this story is amazing, I recently visited Zion also, although I didn't go rock climbing, I saw Angels Landing, and I'm happy to know exactly what you are talking about.

I can't actually wait for the next chapter. This fic is awesome!