Reviews for AWOL (Unedited)
Tsunamijackson chapter 18 . 4/17/2016
Yay! New chapters:) Keep em coming girl!
authorwannabe101 chapter 18 . 4/17/2016
I cannot believe you ended it there. I can't believe it! Please update soon, you've been doing such a great job with updates but I need J-Unit to find Alex /now/. Pretty please with a cherry on top? And THERE'LL BE PEACE WHEN YOU ARE DONE. :D
LuminousMoonRay chapter 18 . 4/17/2016
YESH!
Stay strong Alex! Ain't no crazy bish, going to break you yet! (Or ever, if your team has any say in the matter!)
Also, I do believe he's gone into shock, (its probably not going to help his potential PTSD...)
Ooooh... Be safe there, Lion, Tiger.
Noooooooo! ... :( Al!
Don't follow the light!
LuminousMoonRay chapter 17 . 4/17/2016
Thank god for Al's curious nature!
Oooo! Tranquilizers! Nice!
Come on man! Finds the all so beautiful (and probably a red button, because what button ISNT red?) And push or twist it to activate that tracking sig!
I thing he did it!
Ah! _
The crazy bish is back!
Well. Their goes Alex's overlap sanity for a good while.
All I can ask is... Will he be blowing up the compound/building to the ground?
dorfchaosgenie chapter 18 . 4/17/2016
Wait...you wouldn't... Or would you? But you can't! Please don't do this to me! Let him be safe, go home, spill all his secrets, stay in SAS, get rid of all his MI problems (with a little help) and stay awesome!
Or he could be resurrected by Castiel :D maybe there is a heavenly mission for him _
Anyway! Great chapter (as always) and I can't wait for the next :)
natashabromanoff chapter 18 . 4/17/2016
I haven't reviewed in a couple of chapters, so I'll try to leave a good one for you this time :)

I've really loved this story the whole way through! I'll admit to predicting none of the plot twists (but I'm always really bad at that anyway) and thoroughly loving the characterization of everyone and I'm very very concerned about Alex! like I'm as up for angst as the next person but please let him be happy? PLEASE? (I'm sorry it's just...I'm watching les mis right now and someone needs to be happy okay)

looking forward to the next update! you're pretty great! 3
Niamh x chapter 18 . 4/17/2016
I'm surprised she stabbed him, I thought it would be more personal than that, but I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next! Thankyou xx
Guest chapter 18 . 4/17/2016
I love you and this story... BTW do you intend to complete operation zeta? All of your fics are awesome.. Love your writing style
aSkyFullOfStarz chapter 18 . 4/17/2016
I'm literally dying right now! You write amazing stories like this one and I'm dying to know what's gonna happen next! Plz try to update sooooon! :)))
shratata chapter 1 . 4/17/2016
But wot if alex was not kil?
sbayless44 chapter 18 . 4/17/2016
I am enjoying this story, and I really appreciate your mention of Carry on Wayward Son in the AN at the end... I live in Kansas and that is one of the few good famous things that comes out of Kansas, so I get excited when people mention it... I look forward to the last few chapters; however more there may be.
Riderkitty chapter 18 . 4/17/2016
I certainly liked how it was written. Really great chapter. I can't wait to see how this ends. You better not let Alex die!
Niamh x chapter 17 . 4/16/2016
This is so painful. I'm crying so much, 13 is a bitch but I understand ish but Alwx should just scream at her, he still has nightmares, he still cries about leaving her, he hates himself for it and he would probably have died if it meant he could go back for her, I hope none of J or K unit get too badly hurt, I wonder if anyone will recognise him as Alex or if they'll be told. I hope when Alex sees Jones again he tells her he wishes he didn't miss in scorpia! Can't wait for the next chapter! Thankyou xx
nrynmrth chapter 17 . 4/15/2016
waugh! So angsty and BEAUTIFUL! I must admit, though, that I'm getting a little tired of reading about Alex's mission- just being bluntly honest here. Maybe it's time for him to escape, or something. Idk, it's your story, and I can't wait to read the next chapter, no matter what you choose to do!
Whisperponyx chapter 17 . 4/15/2016
Well damn... that escalated quickly
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