You have once again made me a complete mess of snot and tears.

Little White breaking the way that she did completing began my need for toilet paper to wipe away the snot and tears from my face.

I will forever think of Indomninus as Little White. No alternative.

I am curious though, with Fallen Kingdom now out, where would Joanna fit in?

Putain désolé d'être si grossier mais j'ai grave pleuré sur la fin pauvre white et la chercheuse a fendre le cœur aie aie aie super en tout cas :)

Well done.

Good times.

Oh yeah.

Some things aren't worth believing in.

Odd kid.

Good title.

F#ck it! I didn't need a heart anyway! Take it! You and your loveable death machines that dare to make me freakin cry like a baby...but God damn I get too attached to misunderstood creatures...I hate that I loved this story, it made me feel too much, congratulations

Calling this story incredible would be a disservice...because it is worth so much more praise than that.

Your way of describing how the characters felt was masterful and you know exactly how to make your readers ‘feel’ for them. I particularly enjoyed the way you went about Little White’s mental state; it showed just how much of a broken, lost and confused creature she was. Your OC was also very interesting, she was both believable and sympathetic which is proof enough that you did a good job in designing her.

I’ll be honest; this might be the best Indominus POV fanfic I’ve read. You did an amazing job with this story and every favourite/follow/positive review this story received was well deserved. Thank you for writing this!

I’m fuckin cryingggggg

Wait so you had this end. With a VICTIM with HUMAN Dna Getting Murdered. Ohohoho... Boy DONTFLAME I tell myself.

Excellent story! So very glad that you saw it through to the end, too. Though I do wish there was more.

No, I am not crying. I just got some dirt in my eyes.
'Cause I was looking up at the clear blue skies.
Hoping that is where a creature's soul goes when it dies.
Sent on its way with sweetly sung soft lullabies.

-grabs tissues- Thank you for making me cry! -sobs- oh man, this was a great fic, -wipes eyes- It was very well done, and I loved it.