Great on your newest chapter and pointing out out something I didn't even consider in our earlier conversations.

Saito really needs to learn to control his greed and not to push Naruto and Hinata too far cause they could just turn in their headbands and run to Horai Island to live out their lives and that would cause him to lose face when it's found out why they did it.

Also I thought you had already naruto's heritage revealed to him before now?

Great job on the newest chapter.

Awesome chapter

I love how you had Kurama face off against the largest Ice-type pokemon to date and had appropriately made him Kurama's strongest rival.

This was great. It is extremely rare, I can't remember even one example, of a story that delay with consequence of Naruto going on a long mission. Him having to explain to his kids was incredibly well done. It makes sense that the kids won't understand it, considering their age. It is natural and not a good situation to be in. Like how hinata slipped into the mother's role, that was good character development. Also cements her position as a member of Naruto's family. I like how much time and work Naruto invested into ensuring that his kids were properly looked after. I like how he decided to drop them off at his family home. I like the trip. I like how the wave mission family was mentioned again and the hijinks that resulted in. Like how someone people didn't view Naruto as the head considering he isn't there. Like how Naruto is trying to prove himself. Liked the spare. Poor Naruto. The Yukie bit is being done extremely well. Wonder what challenges Naruto is going to have to face. Wonder why Miya didn't talk to iris in Naruto's presence. Wonder what that mermaid has done. Onwards to the next chapter ( maybe tomorrow though unfortunately, considering its midnight over here)

Nice chapter. I love the heart to heart between Naruto and Eva. I like the hints as to why she wasn't ready to enter that level of relationship with Naruto. I also like how the date went. The interaction was on point and felt heartfelt and natural. I like how much Naruto adored Yukie and also the reason why. It makes sense for someone starved of attention and fame to admire someone who basically lives in it. I like how sasuke is coming out of his shell. Like the end to the date. Wonder how the mission will go

Well I finally got around to reading this man it's good to him and the fox coming to terms with each other also I don't know how to feel with the part with chaos and Iris I know you said it was so they can bring the full power of the Crystal but I don't know I think it's their age that makes it wired for me even if it's just kissing.

I applaud you for the Goblin Slayer references in this chapter. I also liked how Naruto created a Glaceon from his failed attempt at summoning a familiar.

Wonderful chapter, keep up the good work.

Excellent chapter, keep up the good work.

No I was hoping he wouldn't go all dark side on us I still think Naruto should have won this fight though but it is what it is can't wait to see what happens next keep up the good work mate.

Where are Tsukuyomi and Susano'o?

I am finally free. Sorry for the late response but had to deal with as very tough month or two. Didn't have enough time to read chapters bigger than 10k words.
Happy I am finally able to read this.
I loved the start. Nahi is a great character. Her interaction with Naruto is simply amazing and a joy to read. I love the whole dinner bit. I like how Naruto defended his friend and also how he wasn't afraid to stand for himself. I also like how no one was bashed, yet not everyone was with Naruto. The interaction between Naruto and Hinata at the end was simply amazing.

Finally got around to reading this and I can't wait to see how you're going to handle the snow mission also I really enjoyed seeing him interact with the people on the island and to be honest I kind of forgot about Sakura training with the other.