Reviews for The Return Of The Immortal Clan |
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Raiden Hitsugaya chapter 3 . 6/8 Update |
Jessica9906 chapter 3 . 3/9/2019 Great I love it When will we continue? Yeah, you'll need a nice Harem for Naruto to dial Yugito, Mei, Samui, Yugao, Mabui, Anko, Kurenai, Hana, Tsume, Tsunade, Mikoto (yeah milfs it's pretty hot with naru) and oh make sure that end up all get pregnant with Naruto? |
Kevin chapter 3 . 11/17/2018 More please |
monsterkillers124 chapter 3 . 6/12/2018 I meant not |
monsterkillers124 chapter 3 . 6/12/2018 Hado shut up also do you plan on ending this story or continuing it just wondering because this is a fantastic storyline I am very interested in it 9 adopting It But continuing reading |
HadoFoxGodAsashi chapter 1 . 12/1/2017 You're still a jackass, stop writing this Kishimoto loving garbage. |
royal gamer830 chapter 3 . 5/3/2016 finish this is a good story |
moops chapter 3 . 4/18/2016 Please return to this . I like it alot |
SPark681 chapter 3 . 1/26/2016 Hmm nice story wonder who else is going to drop in on Naruto anyways keep up the great work! |
Wondering Knight chapter 2 . 1/10/2016 The story is good but you should stop using kaa and tou and just go with mom/mother dad/father. You use Japanese and then English for them both at time. But when you just say kaa or tou and don't add the -san it reads weird. |
frytrix chapter 2 . 12/31/2015 Good story, but the spelling could use some work. |
DragonPony022 chapter 3 . 12/31/2015 Well this was interesting to say the least. At least his date with Tsume went well. I do wonder how this family breakfast will go? It does seem odd that they are trying to act like parents to him after how they acted towards him. Well corrections if I remember right it was more Minato that acted funny towards Naruto then Kushina. I wonder what other females will end up getting close to Naruto. I was thinking it would be interesting for him to get Hinata as well. I mean the older male teacher and his younger shy female student. It would just be great to see lol. Anyway great chapter, can't wait to see more |
Latherial chapter 3 . 12/31/2015 Good chapter, looking forward to the next one. |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/31/2015 A very good chapter |
spidersage chapter 3 . 12/30/2015 amzazing please continue this awesome story |