I always says all fanfics are piece of art. But today I read absolutely worst Fanfic. This fanfic is well written but this fic has absolutely worst and Sad ending. I can't believe I ever say this about any fan fiction. People usually write fan fiction to change endings like this but you done exact opposite. This fanfic shows your own tragic life author san . Friends, if you like happy endings please don't read it

How was the girl family when he barely knew her for a day and took him out to rob a mansion, she was clearly just using him.

Still no fkin update fuck I want Crazy as fuck harry already I wanna see him eating the grail slurping angra lol

Well really like the story, really helped past the time for me today for all the chs. Was pretty good can't wait until u get around eventually to do the sequel

I got to admit I like premise of it I hope u make it into a actual story eventually

truth be told, i guess you could say its well written but personally i hated this story, alas i think it was my own fault for not noticing it was tagged as tragedy. i eave this review so that nobody else commmits my mistake, if you like happy endings dont read this, it has a horribly tragic, and at least for me unfulfilling ending. Its my opinion Gilgamesh is too onedimensional and flat, and not even the part of harry that is enkidu had any influence. once again, it is well written but i consider it trash. Ofcourse that is my personal opinion and taste, if you enjoy tragedy you might like it.

Your story is very well done, and I like it quite a bit, i just wish that you had put in a more obvious warning that Gilgamesh was truly using Harry and would not end up taking care of him for real. I was blindsided by the ending, though I suspect that I blinded myself to Gilgamesh’s intentions in favor of the ending I wanted. All of that said, very well done, I was practically frothing at the mouth with rage at Gilgamesh and the damn priest, but that was the intention I am sure.

Oh boy what a ride.

First of all my main issue, Harry Potter didn't feel like Harry Potter You could make this a pure OC and very little would change. I am not a fan of using a character's skin but not their characterization.

But I stayed because your writing skills are awesome and even though this was a different Harry Potter you stayed consistent with your established character and development.

Finally Gilgamesh, You nailed her. Archer Gil is a pure aole a manipulator and a cruel monarch changed his gender shouldn't and didn't change that.

I can't wait to read the sequel whenever you make it.

I can speculate on a few ways the Grail could troll Gil-chan.

First of all Dark Sakura or something along those lines. AKA someone becoming a portal to the root and thus destroying even Ruler. Secondly other Gilgamesh it would be fun to see Gil vs Gil. Caster Gil would be an excellent choice.

Finally any Grand Servant would do. But I prefer the Thot Slayer Gramps. Anyways it was an Epic read which I really enjoyed

Glad you made it peace

Interesting story ! I’ve never watched FSN before so I found it a bit hard to follow but it’s peaked my interest. I may just watch the series and re-read this book

So plotting the sequel ?

nxrt .

I want this Harry broken I want him to turn in angra mainyu and for sequel he just fucks on HP Cannon and shits on all while going crazy and I mean batshit to the point he starts to worry even Gil Chan in a way

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