this is such an amazing story i love that you made it your own . no bitch troll Christian was no longer into bdsm and was open to love we he received it from Ana. i love that Ana found out dhe had family from her biological dad and Christian found that his mom and dad was in love with one another and with him also . i also love that Elliot and kate did get together he had a relationship with someone else .
I truly love your story

Sorry, but this story is not good at all.

Ana is such a immature bitch

Ana needs to let that shit with the ex sub go. She's so damn annoying,

J'ai beaucoup aimé cette histoire. J'ai rit et pleurer à chaude larmes. Un parcours cahoteux mais merveilleux. Bravo et merci pour vos écrits.

I know this story was posted a while ago I just wanted to leave you a comment I've read both of them extraordinary and wish this is my second or third time reading it. I just want to make a comment for all the authors note you put up. I may have not liked how sometimes you portrayed the characters, but at the end like you said this is your story this is the way you pictured it in your head. I want to thank you because you took time out of your life to write a story I know it takes a lot for somebody put themselves out there. my comment to you is me personally I will give feedback sometimes constructive criticism but I will never ever attack someone personally or put a negative comment. this was your vision and thank you it was a beautiful vision.

Your mother was truly blessed with a very talented daughter who love her.

You are a amazing writer, don't pay any the trolls who try to hurt you. Don't listen to those people who have no talent to write so all they can do is try and insult your talent. The rest of us love your stories. So keep writing , your the best.

I really like the way u r twisting the story I'm LAUGHING, crying, being curious abt what will happen next. I'm really happy that I'm reading this . Thanks for writing this

This story jumps around a lot was just talking about christin getting out of the hospital and ana dr appointment now it’s New Years

This was a very nice story. I loved the ending and the change in Mr Grey. Thank you

Perfect

I loved your story, it’s just one thing that don’t like, and you like the majority of the writers make José a villain. He is either a sick crazy addict , and almost never a good guy. Who finish college and becomes successful. In the final analysis I loved this story. Good luck to you and keep writing!

So stupid of Christian! he needs to grow up! excellent writing! you sure know how to make your scenes real! I wanted to slap him! LOL

God your you for so much to see you with one of your own give up.