I constantly hate myself for staying up until 2:00 AM because I just have to read this entire story all at once.

I've spent four/five hours reading this... It's 1: 35 AM. Definitely worth the 4 1/2 hrs of sleep I'll be getting

This was such an amazing story! Omd I'm going to reread this for sure. You made me fall in love with RusUK more than I already was. This truly did make me laugh at times and don't get me started on the way it was written. It was amazing. Except for some bits were it seemed really rushed. But every story has a scene or two like that. In any other way I give this story an 11/10

Thank you for making this fic. It's not often I can find a story for this ship and it's really nice.

Though if I have anything to say about it, I didn't really get into it from the start. There were some areas that were rushed in the beginning that made me cringe and the sudden setting pace threw me off sometimes.

But the story came to a good normalcy in the middle, but there are subjects that really left me confused and when addressed, had me even more confused. The sudden shifts of scenarios in the story was a bit sudden as well, but fairly well initiated. Could have wished there was more interactions between the whole group as one, but with all the stuff you've written in such a short amount of time is amazingly impressive.

All in all I'd give it a 7/10. Some parts were rushed and confusing, but other than that. It's a well made and fun story to slowly grow on.

END? HOW TO END SO? * Crying a lot * I have no words to describe how much this fanfic was important to me, it makes me cry, laugh, made me start shippar RusUk (Kol Hoata), she just melted my heart, made me happy with their delicately written chapters , made me eager to read the continuation, really, it was worth every moment spent reading this fanfic, each poured tear, every laugh and smile. I just have to thank you all this, thank you! I have one last favor to ask! Please, think of a possible continuation, even if it is just a oneshot! Probably the review will not be as big as I'd like, but I hope you have understood the affection I have for this fic! If you are writing another fanfic RusUK or any other subject, let me know, I will have a lot of affection to read it! Again, sorry for my English rough! I hope it does not bother you too! As they say here in Brazil:

Hello! Well, I really have no words to describe how much I love this fanfic, I love your writing, seriously, can not help but fall in love with is fic, I just fell in love with it in the first chapter. It took a while for me to finally gather the courage to send that comment, sorry about that! . Sorry also for my English, I'm not American! I am Brazilian, so I speak Brazilian Portuguese (it's very similar to the Spanish!), I'm typing all in Portuguese on Google Translate, praying not to leave a very bad mistake ! Hehe, you have a Brazilian reader. Continue with the fanfic! I'm sure you will go far with it!

RusEng.! I'm so elated.! Here's a new one for one of my OTPs... Gott, you have no idea how long I've waited for this.!

I love your writing style. So immersive. But I suggest line breaks whenever relevant. I got confused with sudden setting changes, and no wonder others will be too. Other than that, maybe a few chinks here and there, but overall, very fine writing.

You update much too fast, it's no wonder only a few people have seen this. The trick is sporadic updating for the most exposure. I understand you post a chapter as soon as you finish because this is for NaNoWriMo.? I'm impressed.

Keep up the good work, hon.! :)

Write on.!
~Yuna

Love it.

Love!

I like the idea of the story and I'm awaiting the next chapter, but to just inform you the first chapter has been posted a second time and labeled as chapter two! :)