I finally found it! Its so freakin cute! With ur cute-ass nicknames, they freakin kill me! This story is so good. I wish I could draw, so I can make a comic of this, but nevertheless please keep it going girl! God gave u a gift! P.S. Sorry, but kind of a stickler for grammar. One sentence began with a conjunction (but) but made perfect sense. I think two others ended with a preposition (one of them was 'to'). These sentences close to each other, near the end of you story. Just my two cents! Bye!

Poor jack.

This is so lovely.
Nicely written!

Never broke a promise, eh? Wish I could say the same thing. *smiles*

Cute little piece, mournful and sad, but just like Aster, it contains so much hope.

Little hiccup; "...Aster barely hurt the last word ...", sure you mean heard?

Wonderful fic, you've slowed up so much, I hope the snowball rolls downhill and picks up speed soon!

Aww, that was so cute! :'D Poor Jack, I love this.

AW! I LOVE this! It's absolutely amazing! So heartbreaking and awesome! Rock on!

Awwwwww. So sweet!