That was... amazing. I'm not sure how to put it into words. The love between the two and the depression that Liam has are two things that seem very real in the story. Like very realistic. At points, I felt like some of the things they did like at the start where Scott is so concerned about a stranger.. I thought that was unusual. But as it kept going, you actually kept resolving those little problems, like the character was aware of how strange it was too XD And Liam's depression was dealt with so well. Like I have depression myself and it wasn't over the top or offensive or unrealistic at all and it added to the story so well. I like Liam with Scott. They're so cute :P But ye.. I could talk about this story all day. I'm kind of sad it's over. I kind of wanted it to go on for longer. The chapter where he attempts suicide in the lacrosse field was very.. powerful. And the aftermath felt very natural. But I kind of wish I'd seen them get back to being very comfortable and loving towards each other like it's mentioned in this epilogue/diary entry chapter. I dunno. I just wanted to see you write about so much more just because this was so perfect. I don't want it to end hahaha. Like I think exploring their first time together would've been.. a good thing to write about. But if you're not comfortable writing that, I get it. But ye.. I loved it. I hope you read this and reply XD

Loved this, especially that last quote: "Scott is my universe" :)

Brilliant. Like, publish-quality. It's amazing. The analogies and word choice only add to the main point. Keep it up.

I LOVED IT! Update when you can! You're a fantastic writer! Amazing story!

Oh no...

A good chapter, and that is one HELL of cliffhanger, I really wasn't expecting this twist of events. Looking forward to seeing Chapter 24, like soon!

Omg please update- I love this! You're an a

Amazing chapters! Really well done!

Yay this was a great chapter! I actually was smiling as I read through it-the fluff was amazing-Melissa McCall is literally so adorable in this and the way she accepts Liam & Scott is so sweet. I love how you don't resort to common tropes like "the-best-friend-vs-the-boyfriend" and how Liam finds Scott's friends so supportive too. Awesome job! I really like it!

Also I LOVED the scene where Liam talks about his scars. I love the way Scott talked about it fading away with time and how Liam compared it to the depressive thoughts he has.

Also (final thing sorry) but I love how the story focuses on Liam & Scott but you've managed to include development for characters like Lydia, Stiles, Malia, and Melissa. Seriously-you're like juggling a million plates at once and you're doing it flawlessly. Can't wait for the next update!

Loved this! Update when you can!

Great chapter! I was actually laughing out loud when Scott was flirting. Again great job! Look forward to seeing the next one!

Please up date and i know that you updated today but please update soon.

I have to admit that when I first read the summary for this, I didn't think that I was going to enjoy this story. I figured that I would read a chapter or two and be done. What actually happened was instead of going to bed so I can go to work that next morning, I ended up reading until I finished reading this story at 2:30 am, and I am glad to have found a very well written story that proved me wrong. I really have enjoyed this story, and I am looking forward to seeing where you go with this story from here. I love how everyone is within character, like Malia asking Stiles out for Valentine's Day, and by the way awesome job with the Valentine from Liam to Scott, I think I might have to borrow that one some day. I would be interested in seeing more of Liam's romantic side. I am also looking forward to the double date, and the meeting of the parents, and to see what other surprises tha you have instore for all of us. Again amazing job on everything so far!

Love this story so much! This chapter was awesome! Update when you can :)

Nice story